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#1 cdmtx(YR)

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Posted 02 November 2006 - 10:24 PM

Peace or so it seems
The date is December 16, 1979 the Allied and Soviet leaders have gathered in the city of London, to sign a peace treaty. Yuri and his forces still have a chance of controlling the world, Allied leaders know this’s all too well. They know it is key to get the Soviets on their side if they are to defeat Yuri. If they were called for the Soviets to disarm and disassemble military production sites. The Soviets would not have the power or the will to help the Allied forces. It also appeared to the Allied leaders that the Soviets have learned their lesson of military aggression and would not act in the same manner again.. From pressure from width in the Allied leadership especially from General John Xavier. Economic sanctions were to be placed upon the Soviets after Yuri has been defeated, as some form of punishment for the attack on the free world.

The so called defeat of Yuri and his forces
Yuri and his forces were pinpointed to Antarctica. There the final battle took place with the technology of the Allied and Soviets combined Yuri’s forces were defeated and Yuri himself was captured and placed in a psychic isolation chamber where as General Carville said “he can’t mind control a fly in their”. This psychic isolation chamber is located somewhere in the US Virgin Islands, Allied leaders say “Yuri is locked away in a solid fortress that is impenetrable” General Carville took full credit for the defeat of Yuri and his forces. President Dugan awarded General Carville with the Medal of Honor, the most respected metal in the United States military. General John Xavier, however was furious that General Carville took all of the credit for defeating Yuri and his forces. When it was General John Xavier’s final charge that won the battle. To stand by the side of General Carville as President Dugan awarding General Carville with the Metal of Honor, unleashed a hatred inside of him Towards President Dugan. The date is January 1, 1980 General Carville is giving one of his many victory speeches this one in Times Square New York City. As he stands on the open platform in Times Square bragging how he single-handedly defeated Yuri, when all of a sudden, he falls off of th platform and into the crowd. Sticking out of his shoulder is a long dart, a lone Virus shot him from one of the many windows surrounding the open platform. He dies a few moments after.

General John Xavier
General John Xavier a genius in military strategy who graduated top in his class in West Point and received hands on training with some of the greatest military minds in today’s world. General Xavier had four sons, that join the military to save America from the Soviet invasion. During the battle for New York City General Xavier’s firstborn son “Robert” was unmercifully gone down by a group of Soviet Conscripts. With the death of his firstborn son, General Xavier vowed to save America from this Soviet invasion. During the battle for New Orleans where the Russians called on their Iraqi allies for aid. Is where his second born son died “Timothy. Unfortunately for Timothy, he died a painful death his body was completely mutilated by heavy doses of intense radiation from Iraqi Desolators. After this, he pledged to bring the war to the Soviets. His third born son “Isaac” died in the battle for San Francisco when a V3 rocket plowed into his garrison building killing him instantly. General Xavier demanded he lead the attack on Moscow. But he was denied by General Carville. His fourth born son “Charles” died in the battle for Moscow, when President Dugan ordered a pointless infantry charge. After Charles’s death, General Xavier went to the point of near insanity. He vowed “Before I die, with what ever means necessary I will destroy Russia, and all of her allies once and for all ”

In a position of power
After the death of General Carville, President Dugan needed someone to fill his position. After looking for several weeks the only replacement qualified enough to fill General Carville’s position was General John Xavier. Even though the relationship between President Dugan and General Xavier was poor, he was a perfect fit for the position with his military experience. By March of that year General Xavier called for a meeting with President Dugan, the purpose of that meeting was unknown to the president and his staff. General Xavier had one purpose for this meeting he wanted the Soviet Union and their allies to be completely disarmed, and he demand that tougher economic sanctions should be applied to the Soviet Union and their allies. So it would be impossible for them to rise again. After President Dugan heard what General John Xavier had to say, President Dugan, simply said “no”. General Xavier was infuriated by this. A violent argument pursued it only stopped when President Dugan threatened to fire him from his position. The relationship between the two men began to rapidly deteriorate after that point. Both men were fully against each others positions and views.

The Coup (a military overthrow of the government)
The date is April 13, 1980 By this time the conflict reached a boiling point when President Dugan said “I’m glad that General Xavier’s sons died in the war, so we don’t have more nut jobs like him.” That statement pushed General John Xavier over the edge within two days, he had a fully supported military coup. On the 17th of April at 10:15 PM General Xavier, entered the White House, thanks to his full military access ID. He busted into President Dugan’s bedroom and yelled “With you out of my way, I’ll purge the world of the sickness of communism” and with that he pumped five fatal shots into President Dugan’s chest. At the same time, other coup members were assassinating key US government officials. So General John Xavier could become Commander-and-Chief of the United States of America.. On the 20th of April General John Xavier became Commander-and-Chief of the United States of America.

The call to arms
The date is April 20, 1980 In his an inaugural address General John Xavier stated that Russia and her Communist society are pure evil, and they will be destroyed. He called on all Allied nations to unite in a more unified force, instead of a this weak alliance. The new name he gave to this unified force was the Global Defense Initiative or GDI for short. After his inaugural address he called for the most intelligent man among the GDI nations he ordered them to make new weapon systems of massif power. He then authorized the use of weapons that President Dugan marked forbidden. Now the aggressor has changed from the Soviets to the Allies and their new GDI. What will be next? Only time will tell my friend.

The second part of this story line will be revealed closer to the release date of the mod

Edited by cdmtx(YR), 06 November 2006 - 08:21 PM.

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#2 Nemoricus

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Posted 02 November 2006 - 11:41 PM

Not bad, not bad at all. Keep us posted.
I've had a thought about a Yuri hero that could flip tanks, be pretty deadly to infantry, and gradually crush building, all with the power of his mind.
The infantry and building weapon would likely have to be the same weapon, just with different percent damage against them.
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#3 cdmtx(YR)

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Posted 02 November 2006 - 11:46 PM

I like that! It will fit perfectly into one of the Yuri countries that I'm planning.

PS This is the storyline, not ideas and suggestions :dry:
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#4 Nemoricus

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Posted 02 November 2006 - 11:49 PM

Sorry, this was something I had in reserve for a while and just remembered.
Glad to be of service though.
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Posted 02 November 2006 - 11:55 PM

Its no problem.

So what do you guys and girls think?

Edited by cdmtx(YR), 03 November 2006 - 05:46 AM.

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Posted 03 November 2006 - 03:34 PM

Pretty nice, although I've never liked the idea of adding new persona to the game in a mod.

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Posted 03 November 2006 - 07:08 PM

Hmm, I thought GDI was created by the UN to protect and serve, aka police the world. And Russia is a part of it (Mammoth tank tech etc.).

Also, I think Xavier should win an election instead of killing the president. Sounds way more logical. But a good idea non the less.

BTW, did you read my PM?

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Posted 03 November 2006 - 10:16 PM

Pretty nice, although I've never liked the idea of adding new persona to the game in a mod.

I think, if you add new characters you have a thousand more options open to you in the storyline. And people can't live forever. 50 years later, wait everybody look its President Dugan on life support, and he still president. :lol:

Edited by cdmtx(YR), 04 November 2006 - 06:20 PM.

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Posted 05 November 2006 - 11:00 AM

^_^Waiting ang expecting!:blink:
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Posted 06 November 2006 - 08:39 AM

The story is quite alright IMO but you should correct the "metal" notes to medal, it's supposed to be the Medal of Honor, not the Metal of Honor. OMG! LMAO! ;) and there are a few other spelling errors but I still find the story alright IMO! :D Nice work! ;)

Edited by Scorpion, 06 November 2006 - 08:40 AM.

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Posted 06 November 2006 - 02:22 PM

GDI was formed in 95 as i told you. Pretty big jump from 1980 to 95 in one paragraph.

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Posted 15 August 2007 - 12:54 AM

maybe its a different GDI to the one you see in tiberian sun?
hhmm you's didnt think of that, did you?

you could make it that originally GDI wasnt like a the GDI of tiberian sun, and that the new GDI was formed later in 95 or when ever it was, but befor that it was this GDI

lol, should call it CDI, Communist Destruction Initative, lol :good:


anyway,you can tell us more of the story now :lol:

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Posted 15 August 2007 - 09:27 AM

maybe its a different GDI to the one you see in tiberian sun?
hhmm you's didnt think of that, did you?

Hey... your right, it's the one from Tiberian Dawn.

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Posted 18 August 2007 - 02:53 AM

eerr, acctually, i meant a different one from that too, cause the tiberian dawn GDI is the same one as the tiberian sun one, just like... i dont know, the red alert 1 allies are still the allies in red alert 2

anyway, no i meant a different one completely from the tiberian story line version, it could be a new GDI, because when they used the time machine it changed the future, and so, well yeah, you get what im saying? :good: lol

thats how you could explain differences in the mod and the tiberian storyline

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Posted 09 February 2008 - 05:38 PM

if you actualy go through RA1's missions the soviet advisor to stalin is Kain who is the Proclaimed Leader of NOD,
the story line changes durring counterstrike though, instead of tiberium you face Giant ANTs in where Carvile is introduced (youtube's RA ant vids) Red Alert one is one point in time where the two different time lines start off creating the two different arms races in which we know and love.


other wise it sounds great, the new president sounds a little like i was planning but from an allied view rather than my soviet.

Edited by Black Rose, 09 February 2008 - 05:40 PM.

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