Gundam Legacy: another version

dude you really signed up

w00tness.

dont give me too much credit. If you want thank someone for the story thank infinity

Edited by TeaMaster, 23 November 2007 - 05:52 AM.

there... but now i'm gonna die...

No you won't you big baby .

So Tea, what happens now? How is Yamada gonna jack the Legacy?



I wanna know more

~theAluminumFalcon

In May 8th CE 71, operation Spitbreak is revealed, Shelba tells Yamada of the goal of wiping out the alliance leadership. She hands the intelligence report to him. Yamada looks at it, and note that only the Eurasian Forces are stationed to defend JOSH-A. He immediately realizes the plan EA. Stunned Shelba takes Yamada to an Armory, there she removes the prisoner tag and gains wildly types on the computer. On the screen are his files and schematics of a mobile suit. She deletes his files, and saves the other data on to a disk. Yamada is told to wear a technician’s uniform, is given a card key and is dragged along by Shelba. The armory is still confused by of lost of the ZGMF-X10A Freedom. The two reach a locked door guarded by two soldiers. Shelba tells them to open the door and that she’ll be launching the Legacy. The two guards open the door and Shelba along with Yamada enters. A mobile suit stands, Yamada comments “is that the Strike?” As she’s load the data in the MS she tells him that it is the ZGMF-X08A Legacy. She climbs out of the cockpit briefs Yamada about the Legacy, She tells him that it’s even Nuclear powered and the N-Jammer canceller technology. She tells him that she’s giving him the unit. Yamada asks why she is doing all this. Shelba reply that she knows he won’t hand the technology over to the EA and everything will be ok. Yamada is pushed into the cockpit, Shelba instructs him how to pilot it. Before leaving Shelba request Yamada to save as many lives as he can. Understanding this he enters the Legacy and launches. Shelba begins to prepare for the next phase…

this part is a little slapped together.....

lol seems no one comments about the topic :lol:lol seems no one comments about the topic

Another bloody leech! (gets sharpened stick, cuse these fools dont deserve my lightsaber) lololol...

Anyway, latest part of the story, it being slapped together is fine. The parallel part of the story in the main SEED storyline was really just filler to my eyes. The characters just getting new gundams to replce the ones they lost through stupidity or self-destructive tendencies *cough*athrun*cough*

Another bloody leech! (gets sharpened stick, cuse these fools dont deserve my lightsaber) lololol...

??????? よく言うよ?

anyways....

Part 5
*edit to the last part…. Shelba finds out about operation spitbreak and intelligence of the EA actions, a few days earlier.
Yamada steals the Legacy before Freedom is stolen.

On his descent down to Earth, Yamada locks/hides the Specs and details of the N-Jammer Canceller in the OS. He lands in Panama… After being arrested, Questioned and release, Yamada heads to the Legacy. In the hanger He meets Kumiko once again, who tackles him (in tears). That night, Yamada overhears the plan to use the Cyclops system at JOSH-A to annihilate everything in hopes to diminish ZAFT’s fighting strength in half. Rushing to the Legacy he prepares to launch. Kumiko sees him asks what he is doing. She tells him that the machine he had brought will disassemble tomorrow. Yamada tells her what he overheard, and that he plans to stop it.
(using a script…. again )

[Kumiko]: (draws gun, weakly and in tears) I can’t allow you… this is our chance to win the war. How could you betray-

[Yamada]:(icy glance) If I am to be your enemy then shoot me now.

[Kumiko]: Yamada…

[Yamada]:(angrily) I will no longer be a part of this genocide! And what of our comrades? What of the people who gave their lives? Are we supposed to sacrifice everything?! (gets into the cockpit) Do as you must…

(Narration again)
Kumiko pulls the emergency alarm then fall to her knees in tears, the Legacy launches. There is confusion all over the base; no one knows what’s going on. In Legacy, Yamada runs a diagnostic of the OS and the machine itself, everything checks clear. Malik’s team picks up an unknown signal traveling at high velocity. His team, along with Kaworu Kusanagi, launch it their Dinns to investigate. They intercept the Legacy, no makes a move. Kaworu sends a transmission demanding the unknown MS to identify itself. Yamada explains the situation; however Malik recognizes his voice and fit of rage attacks. Informing other members in his Squad that the unit is a part of the EA, they attack. Kaworu confused, orders Malik to stand down, but he continues to fight. Yamada is forced to defend himself, however his inexperience with a MS prolongs the battle. In the end Yamada shoots down 5 of 7 Dinns, including Malik, and shakes off his pursuers. Malik vows from revenge. Yamada doesn’t make at it in time… He hears a buzzing that he has heard before and a shock wave follows afterward. Where the former EA headquarters was is now a big crater. Yamada gets out of the Legacy and looks at the destruction, he toss his helmet aside in disgust. Not far from him, he sees the Archangel and the Freedom and joins them for the time being.

Edited by TeaMaster, 28 November 2007 - 03:03 AM.

Ah yes, my wit is too fast for some ppl to get. Anyway i just aim to be totally random and to piss the hell out of others.

Nice tie in to the main storyline. Although...at this point i was thinking about the joining up part with the AA. Kinda odd that another gundam is present and yet it is never mentioned or seen. There would have been alot of noise made if there were, so this doesnt really fit into the story.

Agreed, some parallels are fine but I would try and stay away from to many since this is an original story. Also im pretty sure the aim was to keep Yamada on the the EA the whole time and not necessarily show the EA as tyrannical like it is in every other gundam series(I know im exaggerating some).

i ve been thinking how he'll return to EA somehow... maybe he takes the mass driver and launches to space... join the ajax or something... leme think on this and give more suggestions plz

ooooooo sounds good, does this mean we get to use the strike and arcangel in missions?

wrong topic buddy

Oh ho? Sign up first before commenting like that...

Now...wrong topic buddy. There i said it.

I just realized i spelled suckers wrongly in my sig...

Really random today...

Part 6

ok this is what i got

Malik is requested by Chairman Zala to return to the PLANTS for a new assignment. As he packs Kaworu tells him to watch himself, sometimes things are not what they seem. The younger pilot grins replying that it is the enemy who should watch themselves. Kaworu sighs and turn for the door, before he leaves he tells Malik that sometimes the enemy isn’t the one who’s fighting him. Malik remembers the Legacy and the reports from the operation SpitBreak. At the PLANTS he receives the Fate Gundam, and begins to familiarize the system. As the day goes on he overhear the technicians talk about the stolen Freedom and the Legacy & its pilot, Shelba Ludecker. He wonders if it was the Legacy he saw down at Earth.

Yamada gets to ORB, he requests to use the mass driver to be sent into space. He explains that there's a possibility that he can change the influence of Blue Cosmos has on the EA if he goes back. Kira Yamato asks him about the N Jammer Canceller in his unit. Yamada reassures Kira that the EA will get the technology from him. La Flaga asks why not just go back to Panama. Yamada tells them that there's someone in the EA he can trust with the Legacy, but he must go to space. In space, he encounters the Hyperion Gundam. The pilot demands the where about of Kira Yamato, begins to attack, Yamada confused defends himself. It is until an EA fleet arrives the battle resolves the Hyperion leaves. Yamada is relieved because it is the 24th orbital fleet. On the Flag ship, Ajax, Yamada requests to see Rear Admiral Neil Hiro. In the Admiral’s ready room Yamada is told to relax and that he doesn’t have to be so formal. (It is in fact that Admiral Hiro is Yamada’s grandfather) Yamada tells everything that has happened and the story of the Legacy Gundam. With a grim face, Hiro informs Yamada that the Legacy will be dissembled and shipped to the EA. He smiles, bursting into laughter at the site of Yamada’s reaction. He reassures Yamada that the unit will not be handed to the EA headquarters. However he must notify other members of the fleet about this situation, Yamada is dismissed. In his office, the Admiral stares in the stars commenting the chaos if the technology in the Legacy is acquired by Blue Cosmos.

to be continued...

dam long time no see my dad removed my computer privileges cuz i signed up

A LOT to catch up on. Hey Tea are you gonna do Destiny?




THE theAluminumFalcon IS BACK




~ theAluminumFalcon

he doesnt look like a project member, so im thinking no

wow so many guest posts here (including me)...

The gazer of the Star is doing Destiny.

*heroic super sentai pose*