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#1 Neutron4ever

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 10:52 PM

Name: Vrael
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weapons: Carries a large black claymore named Sundavar with engravings on the blade. Often straps the blade and sheath to his back, with the hilt portruding over his right shoulder. Carries a long wooden bow, enchanted to never break, also strapped to his back, under the claymore. Dagger hidden in his right boot. Is fairly proficient in magic able to cast most several normal level spells.

Class: Umm...Warrior/Spellcaster?
Height: 5 foot 11
Weight: 195 lbs
History: (I don't know much about Arcensia so i'll skip this :)
Alignment: Good

Edited by Neutron4ever, 08 April 2009 - 11:46 PM.

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#2 Vortigern

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 11:06 PM

Good effort, Neutron, although I would ask that you tone him down a little. Magic claymore and bow, combined with spellcasting powers? That's a pretty hefty whack in battle. I have several possible suggestions: 1) Remove one of the weapons and un-enchant the other. 2) Make his magic for healing only or 3) Lose the magic. 4) Un-enchant both weapons and tone down the magic to only weak offensive spells.

Also, just to clarify, 195 lbs at 5'9" is very solidly built. It's not a problem, I just wanted to make sure you realised that. I find people have a tendency to overexaggerate weight in pounds, simply because they can't get their heads around the conversions. However, to carry a big-ass claymore, he'd need to be pretty solid, so that all makes sense. Just note paragraph one.
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#3 Neutron4ever

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 11:42 PM

The Claymore isn't magical :)
It's just black
The name is just for cool-ness ;)


The bow is rarely used, it's only there for when he goes hunting.
Also, it's only unbreakable, so it doesn't really affect battle.

And he's not the greatest magician. he can't throw fireballs or anything :)
Maybe throw around a couple of rocks and heal minor wounds, but nothing too spectacular.
His main talent is in swordsmanship ;)

EDIT: Changed his height to 5'11"

Edited by Neutron4ever, 08 April 2009 - 11:45 PM.

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 09:55 AM

Ah, sorry, I figured the engravings on the blade were some form of enchantment. OK then, if he sticks to minor healing magic and a bit of basic rock-shifting or whatever, that'll be fine. Vrael is officially approved, and you are welcome to post in the storyline topic. :)
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#5 Neutron4ever

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 11:14 AM

Yay :)
Now i've got to read the whole RP to see where everyone's at :p
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 12:45 PM

Not necessarily... it'll be easier to play a character who doesn't know what's going on if you don't know what's going on. :)
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#7 Neutron4ever

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 07:54 PM

Good idea...

It's a good thing I haven't read it yet :p
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Posted 12 April 2009 - 04:26 AM

You should read the stuff, though. It's got lots of good writing and a gripping storyline.

Plus, you get to hear about a two foot tall gnomess castrating people and stuffing their testicles in their mouths. :mellow:

I think I've only done that once, so far. :facepalm:

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Posted 19 April 2009 - 01:45 PM

But it was fucking creepy to be quite honest. Not the kind of behaviour I'd expect from a lady ;)
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Posted 20 April 2009 - 02:52 AM

She's a lady who hates the world because she got shoved in an oven when she was younger. That sort of thing makes you a tad bitter. ;)

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