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#1 True Lord of Chaos

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Posted 03 December 2009 - 03:30 AM

My inspiration comes from the song Haunted by Disturbed. I listened to it all the way through.

Embrace of Darkness

The darkness embraces
And haunts, even the best.
The unorthodox are predictable, and the strong become the timid.

Blood chills to ice,
Causing the lightest to become dark.
Sapping them all of kindness,
Generosity, and strength.
The night consumes us all.

The darkness embraces
And haunts, even the best.
The unorthodox are predictable, and the strong become the timid.
Prepare yourself for the
Embrace of darkness.

We had to use a mentor text and use a similar style to it.
The one I chose was a 6-line stanza poem, with one stanza. Didn't copy the length, just the style of filling the poetry with personification.
No matter what people on here think, it's getting used. But, feedback would be appreciated to help with the final draft.

Hello everyone. I am back.


#2 True Lord of Chaos

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Posted 04 September 2010 - 03:18 AM

Well, I'm back.
I read this, and decided I wanted some feedback.
Anyone care to provide?

Hello everyone. I am back.





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