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My Short Film I Made By Myself!
Started by Ralphiaire, Sep 16 2016 01:22 AM
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Posted 16 September 2016 - 04:12 AM
Hey, I actually quite liked that. I do enjoy personal stories like that, though the acting sort of did fall apart after Dominic received the letter. Also, I don't think there was enough emphasis on him being orphaned and not knowing who his mother was. The conclusion was more vague than emotional as a result. And work on that written grammar. Other than that, decent cinematography and nice dialogue. Do stick around and share more.
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