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#1 BagaturKhan

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Posted 31 January 2017 - 01:03 AM

Good day to all. My name is Alexander Krokhmal.

 

At first, I must say, that I`m going to publish full book about my own fantasy universe.

I am planning it a lot, but still decide to wait. My big full story isn`t finished yet. But today I can describe some interesting things about my own fantasy world, which will be published in 2 years.

 

Second, I would like to tell you about my world and you can try to understand what is it.

My world is full of war... like ours. I don`t use other ideas, but I sometimes afraid that in my world there can be something similar to other worlds. For example, similar to Warhammer or LOTR. Yeah its can be and no one can have guarantees about it. Information zone of our world Is almost have infinitive power and thoughts are everywhere. Don`t forget, Alexander Duma also knew people, who made stories similar to Count Monte-Cristo, but that people weren`t plagiators and thiefs, they just made work with similar ideas.

So my world is world of war. It also have some heroes, who can be prototypes of real life historical characters. You can find in my book prototypes of Lenin, Stalin, Hitler, Pinochet, Salazar, Franko and even Slobodan Miloshevic. I am trying don`t make prototypes of nowadays politic leaders, so I am concentrating on historical prototypes.

 

In my fantasy world there are not only powerful space industry and planet colonization, but other parallel worlds too. In my world humans opened not only abilities to capture other planets, but parallel worlds too. So its normal to see in my book space ships, which can make something like "Ways" between our world and some other parallel worlds. Also magic in my world is combining with high technologies. Sorcerers can be in army, in space ships, in government, in the fleet, in the real city life and of course in business. In my world you can find many corporations with sorcerers leaders. Many stockholders in my book have magic abilities. Also economics is not ignored like in other fantasy worlds. In my world economics is main part of world. So you can find thousand banks, merchants, companies, concerns, criminal cartels, weapon traders and pirates.

 

In my fantasy world is very difficult to understand who is Evil and who is Good. Even elves in my book making genocide on other races, Humans destroying each other and loves money, Dwarves making plans to make own independent kingdom and destroy Elves protectorate, Many other races fought with each other and planning to make absolute hegemony. In my book you can find also independent robots, who don`t want to serve "walking corps with blood and gore".

 

Yes, there is also true Evil in my world. True Evil - is mighty race Khi`Ara (Yotuns), who was created by evil god Salah`Zarr many billion years ago. Khi`Ara race is race of daemonic creatures with very powerful magic skills. But no one saw them. In my book daemons are within many races, and they like very much Human race. In my book you can find many humans, who serves daemons, and they can be very powerful people in government, rich merchants, stockholders of big machine concerns, princes, nobles, senators, policemen and ministers. Daemonic acolytes can be everywhere in Human countries. So don`t think that in my book there are typical fairy tales styles with Good knights and Bad Orks. No, I am writing more serious.

 

In my fantasy world you can be something confused.... Because in my world is like in universe of Martin, there are many typical life situations and of course non-ordinary people, like gays, lesbians, bisexuals and even lovers of female robots. But these people can be good people in other situations and they are not maniacs, and they are also not perverts. So I advice you to read it and don`t puke. Please.

 

And then I must say, in my book is the really mix of ages. You can ask me, what is this mix. And I am answering, that Mix of Ages means many different things. For example, one humans country have government style like in medieval Venice (aristocratic republis) with knights, armoured soldiers, nobles with long clothes in XVI century style, and the neighbours country can have more 19 century German style with fashion like in Bismark era. But all of these countries have high technologies, have radio power, aeroplanes, space ships (rockets), tanks, electricity, automobiles and sometimes even nuclear power. This is style of my world, and please don`t think that its weirdless.

So this was my short description of my fantasy book`s world. I will maybe post in this group some short parts of my book and show you my work.

 

You can of course criticize it, give advices and speak about it very honest.

Thanks all for reading this.

 

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Posted 04 February 2017 - 06:58 PM

Main enemies of human race in my fantasy universe.

 

1). Yotuns

Yotuns (Ki`Ara) - is one of the horrible and dangerous threats for all universe. Legends tells different things. Many races thinks that Yotuns appeared in the Age of Firstborn Stars (in the beginning of the Universe Life) and there were servants of Creators. But some of them changed their side and started to want capture all universe and to be the same as Gods. No one mortal person knows about Yotuns origin. Almost no one can understand Yotuns nature. Nobody saw Yotuns truly form. But all knows that Yotuns always make their actions by hands of other races, who serves them. Yotuns have a biggest army of slaves, who can die with the name of Yotuns in their mouths. Some universe wizards thinks that Yotuns can have something like United Mind, supreme commander of this evil. Yotuns also making experiments with low-life forms. This race is the greatest threat for all universe. They can simply destroy all life forever.

2). Ara`Hnii

This race was main enemy of Earth humans over 200 years. In the end of XXI century Ara`Hnii started to be dangerous enemy of Earth colonists. This race of giant insects, who likes to eat flesh and blood. They were insects, who have minds and own thoughts, and who can even talk in other languages. They can be in different forms - flying, underworld-driving or standard. This race is controlled by powerful Bugs Queen, who is their Matriarch and main leader. Bugs Queens have life the same as ordinary Ant queens. They also have government as Butterfly Council. Mighty Butterflies helps Queens to rule her empire. Ara`Hnii race have bionic technologies and even space fleets. Humans won a lot of battles with Ara`Hnii in the space and in the corrupted planets. Bugs Queen was destroyed by heavy atomic bomb, and now (in XXVI century) Ara`Hnii is not dangerous for humans. Humans defeated this race.

3). Khas`Zaa`Aris

Khas`Zaa`Aris (Khazars in humans lang.) was the one of dangerous races for humans in XXII century. Their form is almost like humans, so its can be possible to call them humanoids. Humans met them in the planet Cassao. They tried to destroy all natives in Cassao planet. Humans helped poor peasants to defend their villages and towns. Khazars leader (Maha`Lord) was angry about it and started to kill humans in this planet. Khazars race was the race of warriors. Each representative of this race (male or female) was the warrior and can fight with melee weapons since 3 years. Earth president made order to destroy all Khazars military bases in the Cassao. Maha`Lord of Khazars and his forces was completely destroyed in Cassao by forces of Earth Coalition. Stealth Bombers of Arizona corporation made their work very good. Soon Khazars left Cassao planet forever and stopped make genocide of locals. New Khazars leader made peace pact with Humans and now they are even have trade agreement.

4). Sozidaus

Sozidaus was the race of ordinary "small green figures" as in many sci-fi books of 70s years. Humans found them in XXIV century. When human astronauts saw members of this race in the first time, they thought that Sozidaus can`t be enemies for humans. They tried to speak with them, but aggressive aliens killed them all and made pyramide from their heads and bones. Earth president gave order to send powerful army against this creatures. Soon Earth forces understand that Sozidaus are not "small and silly bastards". Sozidaus have powerful army with giant machines. There was war between humans and Sozidaus. After 8 years of this bloody conflict, Sozidaus left their homeworld and soon they disappeared completely. Humans never saw him since 2360 year AD. Maybe now they started to be part of Yotuns great army. Nobody knows, where is Sozidaus now.

5). Croco

Croco Race also have the second name - Crocodilides. This reptiloid (lizard) race was truly horror for human colonists in the end of XXIV century. Their first attack was to the planet Urus. Earth forces destroyed aliens ships and captured prisoners, but almost 4 big cities was completely destroyed by Croco firepower. "Evil lizards" tried to make their invasion again, but humans called help of race, which members were friends for Earth. Dragons race agreed with people and helped them in Croco wars. Dragons were something like Gods for Croco race and evil lizards left Urus planet. Soon Croco leaders made peace agreement with Humans and Dragons. But in XXVI century Croco race made alliance with Yotuns and they started to be part of Yotuns great army. Now Croco is again enemies for humans.

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Posted 08 February 2017 - 08:07 AM

Ragnarok Messengers

 

This cult was created by Ibrahim Kael Firson, leader of the fanatics group. Ibrahim wasn`t fanatic in his young ages, he was the scientist and worked in the "Enlightment" corporation. Corporation scientists groups were in every part of the universe and many of them tried to find something like alien technologies and secret arthefacts. Corporation pay heavy money for their workers. Firson was the part of scientists group, which task was - to explore ancient temples of H`Shangaara race.

In one temple in the planet Archai there was ancient trap and Firson with his group disappeared within the building. It was catastrophe for scientists group. Corporation sent group of their security guardsmen, because grand-director John Equilogos didn`t want big problems. But scientists group wasn`t there. Guardsmen didn`t find anything. Temple was destroyed, and director Equilogos said to all stockholders, that Firson`s group is dead. This problem was finished for corporation leaders and they closed discussion. Firson was added to the Corporation necrology archives.

But after two years, Firson returned. He wasn`t the strange and crazy scientist like before, he started to be different person. He didn`t say about his return to Corporation and he even destroyed his house, which was home for him many years. Firson wasn`t alone in his work. All his scientists group didn`t die in the catacombs of the ancient temple. Many scientists are also returned. But their characters were completely changed. It was something strange. Catacombs changed them all.

After a month, Firson and his scientists organized the attack to "Enlightment" corporation main office in the Nevada state. Some fanatics burned themselves in front of the main building. Other fanatics killed security guardsmen by the help of alien weapons. Firson and his group infiltrated to the main office of the corporation. They killed almost all people in the building. Firson knew, that grand-director Equilogos is within the building and he wanted to show him his wrath.

Attack was very fast. Equilogos even didn`t try to stop the stockholders conference. Fanatics with their weapons entered the conference hall and killed all stockholders, except Equilogos. John was in wonder and horror, when he saw the face of Firson. Firson almost was not the human. His eyes were red as the dying stars. Also director saw the same thing in the faces of other fanatics. When John tried to ask Firson about his return, leader of fanatics immediately threw his body to the window. John Equilogos was dead after 10 seconds. He fell from the 101th floor and his body was crushed.

After this, Firson and his group immediately captured computer center of the Corporation office. They started to upload their video-files in the main site of corporation. All network of the Earth saw the message of Firson in that day. Firson called himself as the Ragnarok Messenger. When videos were uploaded, Firson and his group killed themselves by their weapons and soon Main Corporation office was exploded. Fanatics also mined the building.

Now many experts and government leaders thinking that Firson was captured by Yotuns, when he disappeared in the old temple. Video files of Firson spoke about Ragnarok (end of the worlds), which can crush all universe very soon. Firson said about great power from the world without light. Its very interesting, but when Yotuns attacked research centers of Earth Alliance, their first message was also sent with these words. "Universe know her horror from the world without light" - this phrase was said by one of the Yotuns, who captured Alliance station in the planet Zinari.

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Posted 24 February 2017 - 02:45 PM

King Arthur and Yotuns.

 

King Arthur was the son of roman prefect-praetorius, which was the governor of Britain province. In the Roman times Arthur was one of the cavalry commanders and founded Round Table Order. He started to invite many British nobles and their sons to his order and they all together protected Britain from other enemies. When Romans left Britain, Arthur started to be the king of his people. His mother was from britts tribes and he was more british then roman. But nobody knows that Arthur and his knights met the most horrible enemy then Saxons or Pictish tribes. They met Yotuns, the most awful threat in the universe.

Yotuns sent to Earth their secret agents even in the period of Troyan War. They tried to make conflicts in the planet and crush powerful realms there. Some big wars in ancient worlds - is Yotuns work (for example Persian invasions). In the 3rd century Roman empire had period, which was called as Imperial Crisis. Roman Empire had horrible civil war between many emperors and usurper rulers. Some wizards even in those times knew that all of this is work of evil gods. They didn`t know about the other names of these evil gods - Yotuns. Later Yotuns destroyed Western Roman Empire by the hands of barbarians and Huns tribes.

In the age of king Arthur ruling, some Dragons attacked british cities and castles. These creatures killed too much people and burned all buildings. Merlin, the greatest wizard and advisor of Arthur, said to king that Dragons are not appeared accidentally. These dragons had steel armor and their speed was too fast. Many people, who saw them, described Dragons as creatures with steel body, fast speed and a lot of fireballs from their giant mouths. Also they heared strange sound, which was like sound of powerful wind.

King Arthur called all his knights and sent them to kill Dragons. But almost all army was destroyed by these creatures. Then king Arthur with Merlin decided to use Excalibur, powerful sword, which was found in one of ancient temples. Arthur fought by himself with two daemonical creatures. When they came to his castle, Arthur pushed strange button in the Excalibur blade, and after this powerful lighting storm completely destroyed evil dragons. Many people thought that it was the work of God. King Arthur understood that Excalibur is too powerful weapon and also he didn`t know all power of this artefact. He gave order to take Excalibur to secret place. Nobody found this weapon even now (in 2596 year).

Also some secret documents said about another (Yotuns?) attack to Earth in the age of king Arthur. The horrible creature, which had name Orlik Four-Head, attacked the lands of Slavic tribes. Many Slavic people called this monster as Snake Gorin. Many other legends told about horrible and powerful creaturs, which tried to make people bad things, killed many of them and made horror in many lands. Many fantasy tales or fairy tales speaking about these creatures. Many legends were about the sea monsters or ocean giant creatures.

Was all of this truth? We can`t say. Nobody knows who was king Arthur. Nobody knows where is Excalibur. Nobody knows who was Merlin. Nobody knows, who were many creatures from fairy tales. Is it truth or fantasy? Nobody knows. There are many theories and riddles in the Scientists Conferences.

Now there is age of space technologies, other worlds colonisations and high level of life. Now the year is 2596, there is time of Humans rising. But nobody even now knows about ancient legends. To be fair, the fantasy wasn`t best genre in the ancient times. Fairy tales weren`t fairy tales. Maybe this all was truth. But if it was really truth, we must say thanks to king Arthur and his Round Table knights. And maybe we must try to find his secret weapon?

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Posted 25 February 2017 - 07:24 AM

Races, which can be Humans relatives

Humans in my book are not only living in the Earth and not only Earth alliance was the state, which created by human race. Humans and their relatives have a lot of own states in the all universe. Now there is no official theory about how humans appears in the universe planets, which were too far from Earth. Scientists trying to explore this secret, but all their theories are only theories and still no proofs. Many scientists made theory that Human race already colonized universe and this even was million years ago. Maybe some alien races explored Earth in the too old ages and relocated some humans to other worlds. Many humans mutated to other races and forget about their main origin.

Byzantians

Hybrids of Humans and Eyrr races. Legends saying that Gods relocated humans from their homeworld to new planet, which have name Byzantium. It was million years ago. Byzantium started to be new home for humans, but soon they met another race Eyrr. They fought with Eyrr many thousand years and soon they started to be allies. After some centuries Humans and Eyrr started to be completely united race. Now Byzantium is the one of powerful universe realms. Earth Alliance had pact with them about peace and help. But Humans from Earth still thinking that Byzantians are alien race and not connected with humans. Byzantians are even like humans. But their world have strange anomaly energy, which making some of them powerful sorcerers and giving special abilities to explore four-element secrets. They are more sorcerers and prefer to don`t use special technologies power.  Their have powerful kingdom with English-ruling system (it means, they have emperor but he is like symbol, because the most important government system - is their parliament).

Ghoul`Khan

This race of mutants, who were humans in their past. Human colonists tried to build new colonies in one of the universe worlds, and native race, who lived there, was very good for human reproduction. Humans mixed with native tribes and soon they started to be new race - Ghoul`Khan. They have only one big world, which is their homeworld. They are aggressive and very evil creatures. They made too much wars with other races for colonies and many aliens hates Ghoul`Khan for it. Race of Ghoul`Khan almost don`t use magic, but likes very much to improve their technologies. They made alliance with Hekatonheir race and started to build many powerful armies with robots and androids. Their technology level is very improved. Army of Ghoul`Khan Empire can be threat for many races. But in last 2 centuries, Ghoul`Khan Kaisers don`t trying to make their empire more big, because they started to stick more peaceful politics. Maybe Ghoul`Khan started to afraid of the Elf-Urr power or maybe they tired of wars.

Winjo

Strange race of "everyday happy people". Their mood is always the best and good. To cry or be sad - in their realm is violation of society rules. Even if someone of their race is dead, Winjo people are always happy, because this dead person is going to Light world. Winjo race thinking that they are not connected with humans. But Earth Alliance scientists found the connections. Winjo have big empire and powerful level of technologies. They have under control several planets. They have very powerful army. Humans have alliance with them against all threats. Winjo don`t believe theories about their past and don`t think that they are humans. But Winjo always happy to help humans with all things. Winjo are like humans, but don`t have persons with strictly black or red hairs. Their hair colours are always white, yellow, blue, pink or even green. The second name of them is "many-coloured hair race". Typical anime race.

Stra`Jiss

Nobody believed that this race have any connections with humans. They are very tough giant creatures with long heads, armored skin (like reptile), no hairs and strong hands. Their males and females are even identical. But scientists found their connections with humans. Stra`Jiss race is living in the planet with huge radiation level. They mutated to other life forms. Their history telling that in their past, Stra`Jis were beautiful race with long hairs and blue eyes. But after wars and increased radiation, their form was changed. Stra`Jis are friends of humans and allies. Stra`Jis have own empire and high technology level. But they absolutely haven`t got abilities to magic. Their main power is rude force and strong fist. Stra`Jis Autocrator made alliance with Earth Coalition against Yotuns.

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Posted 27 February 2017 - 12:41 PM

Fall of Bat`Gilleto Empire

 

Bat`Gilleto was the empire, founded by one of Hekatonheir race representatives in the one of million universe worlds. At first, it was the colony of Hekatonheirs race. After the thousand years, all was changed. Bat`Gilleto stopped to be colony of the main Hekatonheir Priorate Dominion. In the age of Archprior Calocer III, governor of Bitas (Bal`Gilleto capital) announced his colony as independent state. High Council of Nacht`Barons called him as their Supreme Chancellor. This governor was the first leader of independent Bat`Gilleto Empire. Archprior sent to rebels colonies his grand fleet with gross-admiral Miriama Nehertis. But her fleet didn`t destroy the heavy defence of rebels colonies. Main flagship of admiral Nehertis was crushed in the space. She was killed in this battle with all her army. Soon in the planet Struggas there was announced peace pact between Bat`Gilleto Empire and Priorate Dominion. Hekatonheir leaders stopped their bloody civil war. To be fair, the most big merit of this pact was from new Archprior Caloyan II. Old ruler of Hekatonheir Dominion didn`t even think about accepting the independent colonies. But he immediately died. Many said, that Calocer III was killed by the Caloyan, who didn`t want wars between compatriots. After the Struggas Pact, Bat`Gilleto started to be independent empire. After some centuries, Chancellors institute was destroyed in the Bat`Gilleto and power started to be absolute. Leaders of the empire started to be Tyrants.

 

In nowadays, Bat`Gilleto Empire is already destroyed. It was the long and very bloody process. Yotuns messengers came to Bat`Gilleto planets in the 6666 year (2570 AD in Earth years system). They said to government that their empire must to recognize the greatness of Yotuns and start to believe in them as Gods. Empire leaders didn`t make united decision and soon their state fell down to the bloody civil war. One part of the Bat`Gilleto Empire started to have new name - Diabolic Empire. Yotuns assimilated this part of the mighty realm and its started to be their lands. Diabolic Empire attacked the Bat`Gilleto Remnant forces and crushed them in several space battles. Many planets were captured by Yotuns vassals. Dark Hekatonheirs killed their compatriots without mercy. Yotuns started to be their Gods and rulers. Simonai Lasar started to be viceroy of the Diabolic Empire and true vassal of Yotuns Hierarchy. Lasar army crushed the Remnant in several years. Yotuns gave their vassals new technologies and Rhombus Crownfleet destroyed main army of the other Hekatonheirs. Bat`Gilleto planet was captured by Lasar and there started to be the age of Yotuns rule. In this conflict there were killed over then 10 billions Hekatonheirs. Legends saying that Bat`Gilleto ruler destroyed all his city with himself, because he didn`t want to be witness of Yotuns tyranny. Now Bat`Gilleto is the part of great Yotuns Empire, which every hour planning to take all universe and destroy all light there.

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Posted 27 February 2017 - 03:50 PM

 non-ordinary people, like gays, lesbians, bisexuals and even lovers of female robots


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Posted 03 May 2017 - 07:25 AM

Tscharapunji AI

 

Tscharapunji - is the secret unknown mothership, which appeared in the universe. First contact with this phenomenal flying object was in the age 2594. Earth Alliance scientists frigate explored this ship and sent information to colonial base near the system of Barnaby.

 

Colonial base connection squad sent this information to other colonies and to the Earth Alliance central fleet headquarters. They described the mightiest ship, which was like giant steel starfish. Soon this ship connected with scientists frigate and voice told them that name of this ship is Tscharapunji.

Scientists tried to explore more information, but voice of this ship called himself as Machine Hypermind and made them ultimatum to say about all Earth Alliance technologies secrets. Scientists didn`t do it and Hypermind destroyed the frigate by the help of million flying drones.

 

After some months Tscharapunji mothership destroyed all life in the planet Barnaby-3. All Earth colonies were completely annihilated. Some people had time to send messages to Earth Alliance central fleet. They told about billion steel machines, which killed too much life forms. It was killer machines, terrible robots.

After the destroying of Barnaby-3 colonies, president Joanna Qilich sent to Barnaby system giant fleet with the command of admiral Justin Fokka. Admiral didn`t find any alien ships in the star system, only thousand killed colonists. They didn`t explore even one machine bodies. Only dead life forms.

 

Now, Tscharapunji mothership is the one of Earth Alliance secrets. Earth government don`t know what is it and now trying to find good theory. Senator Odissey Roslin made theory that this ship was appeared not accidentally. He said that Hypermind and all this tragedy was the actions of Yotuns forces.

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Posted 03 May 2017 - 05:32 PM

Names of the most famous Earth Alliance Spaceships

 

Legendary battleship "Fist of Asaheim"
(This ship was known as flagship in the time of Ara`Hnii wars. This massive construction defeated almost 30 insects bionical battlecruisers in the battle of Death Pool. Main weapon of this giant steel monster - is massive Photon Cannon "Saber of Pain". Now its main flagship of her excellency, president Joanna Qilich. Also this ship was reworked and now its truly symbol of power)

 

Battleship "Armadillo"
(This ship was known as the most heavy-armored ship in the time of Ara`Hnii wars. This construction almost haven`t got damage, when Swarm armada attacked its position. Now this ship is the main power of the Earth Alliance, great legacy of the old past. Heavy defense and armor - main functions of the battleship)

 

Caravel "Agony"
(This ship is not so big, but very deadly against big enemy forces. This construction have powerful nuclear rocket launchers, which can destroy almost all enemy fleet by several warheads. It was built in the time Sozidaus wars and made good help to Earth Alliance Corona fleet in the battle of Mikasuki)

 

Galleon "Virulence"
(This ship was built in 2590 year and now its taking part in war with Yotuns. Galleon is massive construction, truly flying citadel. This ship is under control of allied Metamorphes, who are helping the humans with their war against powerful enemy from darkness. Main power of this galleon - thousand heavy turrets)

 

Carrier "Archangel Gabriel"
(This is the space aircraft carrier, which was built in the time of Croco wars. Construction have aboard over 600 space bombers "Saint George", which can make too much destruction to enemy battleships. This ship was built on the H`Shangaara technologies base. Its also have extremely powerful energy-shield systems)

 

Destroyer "Jesus Navvine"
(This ship have the name of the famous ancient Jericho conqueror, who destroyed walls of the city. This construction is the most powerful ship of the Earth Alliance. It have too much weapons and great defense. This ship was built in 2540 year, and now this massive steel monster is working against Yotuns armies)

 

Cruiser "Bad Boy"
(This ship is property of the "Enlightment" corporation. Grand-director Barnaby Kharlan had presidents resolution about using this ship in Corporation explorers fleet. This cruiser was pain for space pirates many years. Cruiser is full of heavy rocket weapons and also have very good steel defense)

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Posted 03 May 2017 - 07:13 PM

You cosmology has been partly inspired by existing themes, but the way they are interwoven and with all the new content presented, it leaves a TOTALLY FRESH and interesting taste. It's a new world.

 

I like it, and I see much potential.

Great work man, I am sure you have invested TONS of time and effort.

 

I do no see much interest here, but do not fret - literature has a very specific audience, and most of us (gamers) are reluctant to invest the time needed in order to REALLY immerse into a new world! We prefer the easy way ... that games present.


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Posted 03 May 2017 - 11:20 PM

You might not see much interest, but we do read Khan's work when he posts it.  


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Posted 04 May 2017 - 05:34 AM

Yotuns space fleet

Now more secrets about Yotuns race are opened for you all, friends.

As you know, Yotuns race - is the most powerful evil in my books world. These cruel creatures not only destroying life in the universe, but also capturing planets and making many other races as their vassals or even slaves. Yotuns tyranny and anti-humanity system is trying to spread all universe. Yotuns everytime thinking about themselves as high and godlike race, who can change and transform universe to another form. Yotuns have very difficult government systems. Their main leader is unknown, but he have a lot of messengers (archpriests and sevastocrators), who are spreading his word to all universe.

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1. Battleship "Nachtzonne"
Powerful pyramidal construction with heavy photon weapons. Have also very strong defence (armor from unknown metals), also good anti-rocket systems. Have very powerful energy shields systems, which are not even protect from enemy fire, but even can destroy atomic rockets. Size of this ship is indeed giant. This kind of ships attacked colonies of Earth Alliance in Bukhara systems. One of this dangerous super-ships can destroy entire fleet. This construction was created by sevactocrator Albrecht, one of Yotuns servants.

2. Battlecruiser "Tottenkopf"
Analogue of the same kind of cruisers from Earth Alliance. Very fast and very dangerous. Have form of giant jaguar beast. Have light armor, no shields, but very fast speed. Reactors are working in mysterious Darkness engines. Have very powerful rocket launchers. One of this ships also can destroy entire fleet, because shells of this construction are consist of dark substance, which can make little black holes after the explosion. This ship was created in the Bat`Gilleto systems, which were captured by Yotuns. Project was approved by general Deinz Tzitler.

3. Battleship "Schwarzwurger"
This ship have form of swastika, like arian symbol of sun. This powerful giant construction have very strong shield systems and armor. Its real flying citadel. Also need to say, that this super-ship haven`t got strongest weapon systems against other fleets, because defense - is the main power of this construction. This ships are also intended for armies transport. This can accommodate over then 10k Dark Sun soldiers, includes battle vehicles and aerospace aviation. This ship project was created for Yotuns fleet by Doctor Coel, one of hekatonheir military scientists and technics builders.

4. Battle citadel "Nifleheim"
Extremely powerful battleship, which have telephatic system of control. This construction have very strongest weapons systems. Rocket launchers, laser gun mounts and dark substance spreaders. This citadel can destroy entire fleet of Earth alliance in ten minutes. Have form of giant black octopus, created from unknown minerals. This ship was appeared in the Barton system and started to attack colonies in the third planet. Colonial fleet was destroyed by the darkness spreaders immediately. This construction was created in the Priorate system (Yotuns territories). Approved by sevastocrator Kesselringen.

5. Battleship "Ragnarok Spreader"
Kamikadze ship of Yotuns fleet. This construction can transform to many ships, which used in other races fleets. Also this ship can even copy the signal codes of other vessels. But nobody knows that "Ragnarok Spreader" have automatic control systems. Its controlled by Yotuns Artificial intelligence and have very powerful explosive weapon within. When ship reaches the Earth Alliance (or other states) space docks, artificial intelligence started to activate bomb and then explosion begins. One of this suicide ships destroyed whole space docks in the Phobos (Mars satellite). Approved by sevastocrator Albrecht.

6. Battlecruiser "Eye of Jormungand"
This was the main flagship of sevastocrator Alaial, who also called himself as Beendenkopf (Death Doctor) or Necromancer. This construction have form of giant flying sphere, which have extremely powerful rocket systems. But the main weapon of this ship was Launcher of Death, which can use chemical rockets against planet population and can kill even billion life forms. Several rockets can spread unknown alien gas, which can destroy all organic life. Also this ship had many kinds of biological weapons. Sevastocrator Alaial called his ship as Giant Laboratory of Yotunheim. This construction almost destroyed Young Planet.

7. Battleship "Hammer of Cain"
Giant flying technostation of Yotuns fleet. Have form of giant steel cuttlefish. Ship received his name from Cain, the first man, who killed his brother Avel. Earlier "Hammer of Kane" had another name - "Erhaben", when it was part of Hekatonheir fleet. Construction was updated with unknown metals, which have origin from darkness world. Ship was created by sevastocrator Piatar Telbad Von Hekkendorf in giant space docks of Priorate planet. Ship have very powerful defense and rocket launchers systems. Also this construction have hangars with a lot of battle drones and other cybernetic creatures. This ship can be called as carrier also. One of the popular Yotuns battleships in their fleet.

8. Ironclad "Blade of Dunkel"
This giant ship was the honor of sevastocrator Lasar Blodburg, general-oberst of Bat`Gilleto vassal systems. Construction have form of long steel fish with black coloured armor. This ship have strong shields systems, rocket launchers and massive dark energy beam, which can destroy entire ship in ten seconds. Also it have really powerful defense. No one Earth alliance shell can destroy even one part of its massive defense. One of these ships was used in the battle near Nova-Palestina planet. One of these steel creatures simply crushed the united fleet of Earth Alliance and Stra`Jis empire.
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Super-Battleships
Massive giant constructions, which have truly giant sizes in all aspects. There are only two ships in Yotuns fleet, which can simply destroy planet. They had also the second names as Planet Demolishers. One of them is "Grendel", which have form of giant steel dragon with two heads. The second construction have name "Naglfarr" and it have form of giant flying disk. Nobody knows about their system of controls. These ships have too much secrets, and no one can explore it. "Naglfar" ship is main flagship of Lothar Rofling, Necrokonig, and the "Grendel" is ship of Archpriest Black-Eye, Voice of Uber-energy.

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Posted 16 June 2017 - 09:37 AM

Forgotten Stories (ancient period)

1. Cursed Etherr.

Earl Rogvold is trying to save his realm from the secret enemy. Yotuns are making plans to capture not only whole kingdoms, but full planet too. Will Rogvold win in this battle? Maybe all enemies are already in his realm and this war is completely over?
 

2. Bastards from Jamal

Jack Romilton, leader of Jamal pirates, is making plans to capture mysterious stone. This stone is in the lands of sultan Ashhar and its defense consist of thousand warriors. Jack is sending to battle his main group of friends. But will they capture it very simple? Is it not a trap?
 

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Universe 2596 (nowadays)

1. Tramontina Horror.
(the 1st name was "Fall of Una-Tramontina")

Captain Prada and his brave warriors are trying to save their planet Tramontina from the aggressive Yotuns race. Yotuns are coming and coming to their world with thousand armies, killing too much warriors and peaceful people. Daemons are always know the weak points of Tramontina army. But can it be not accidentally thing? Maybe Tramontina army have Yotuns spy?

2. Masters from Utgartr

Yotuns are trying to invade all universe. Situation became awful day by day. Commander Owen Firelord from planet Una have task to create military base in the world, which have name as Young Planet. But population in this planet are pacifists and reject all military force. People of Young Planet can be victims of Yotuns, but they completely against war. What commander Firelord will do in this situation?

3. Destiny Wind.

Planet Maingard is under attack of giant battleship, which is under control of the rebellios and violent Artificial Intelligence. Armies of robots are going to destroy all organic life in this world. Commander Leonid Swordsman have task to destroy the AI of this ship. But who is creator of this AI and maybe this all is not simple? Maybe its another cruel plan of terrible and mysterious Yotuns?

4. Exodus.

Unknown alien battleship came to the skies of planet Kraskowo. It just hovered over the sky of capital city and does not give any signals. President Stavrogin decided to send there group of special forces with commander Ernull. They are trying to explore all this unknown ship and soon they discovered strange alien female with godlike beauty. She is naked, exhausted and lost her memory. But what is the reason of this ship appearance and who is this mysterious female? Commander Ernull is trying find answers to all these questions. Maybe, this female is not too weak and beautiful, and giant ship is the most big danger for all planet.

5. Dominus Imperious.

Planet Protego is under attack. Mysterious Yotuns ghost Ifraim Arhun-Bay is trying to capture it with the help of half-robots army. He wants to kill all people there and take control on Palace. Commander Mustafa and his troops immediately go to battle and making plans to save all population. But suddenly enemy became more stronger and calling the help of natural daemons. Battle is going to be crushing defeat for human armies. But maybe Secret Trident will save all humans there and will kill monstrous enemy? Maybe this artefact can be pain for Yotuns?

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W.I.P.

6. Infinit-Alpha.
(The final story of all these. Maybe the end of full book).

Artificial Intelligence "Gabriel Mechas" is captured by mysterious alien hacker, who have name Kolia`Aran Solato. He calling himself as Yotuns Prophet and wants to take control on all worlds. Billion of android machines are going to clean all universe from organic life. Who will save this universe from Machines Legions? Maybe its already the end for all?

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Posted 07 August 2017 - 07:06 PM

Old Potestas

Potestas Dominius - mighty state, which was created by legendary Salah`Zarr God in the Age of Old Times. In the ancient ages, H`Shangaara race descendant, which have name is Marfoor Leodegran Salah`Zarr made own empire and tried to capture the whole universe. His main force was his religion, which he tried to spread to all worlds and races. Potestas Dominius was the first intergalactic state, which had only one religion and powerful forces. Armies of Eladraman Potestas were consist of humans and other races, who just wanted to prove their loyalty to mighty Salah`Zarr. This state was the most big evil in the all universe. Many wizards saying, that Potestas threat is even more terrible then Yotuns. Yotuns destroying worlds and all life forms, but Eladraman Potestas spreading dictature form and religious control under all captured worlds. Many humans are started to be slaves of alien, who is calling himself as a God of Light. Eladraman Potestas was crushed by the Rebellion forces and Salah`Zarr government was defeated. Potestas domination period was near 1500 years. It was the biggest star realms in the all universe. Thousand worlds were under control of Potestas government and their religious propaganda.

Reborned Potestas (New Potestas)

Reborned Potestas was appeared not far time ago. Its foundation was in the middle of 26 century AD in the Far Worlds sector. Primaris lords of Enveral planet created plans about reborned Potestas and they had victory of their plans. Salah`Zarr God returned from the Chaos worlds and again started to create his own intergalactic state. He activated all his ancient ships and gave his technologies to his new servants. Reborned Potestas started to be the combined state of humans and Madi`Lim race, which were truly servants of Salah`Zarr. New force is appeared in the universe. New evil is coming to worlds. And this evil can be more terrible even then mighty Yotuns invaders. Salah`Zarr God is now in live again and his forces are very big. Chaos Crusade has come.

 

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Posted 07 August 2017 - 07:06 PM

Forgotten Stories

1. Cursed Etherr

2. Bastards from Jamal

Universe 2596 (nowadays)

1. Tramontina Horror.

2. Masters from Utgartr

3. Destiny Wind.

4. Exodus.

5. Dominus Imperious.

6. Infinit-Alpha.

Chaos Crusade

1. Name of the King (W.I.P.)

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8 of them are completely finished.


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Posted 02 September 2017 - 11:38 AM

Updated list of finished stories....

 

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Forgotten Stories

1. Cursed Etherr

2. Bastards from Jamal

Universe 2596 (nowadays)

1. Tramontina Horror.

2. Masters from Utgartr

3. Destiny Wind.

4. Exodus.

5. Dominus Imperious. (with Extended version)

6. Infinit-Alpha.

Chaos Crusade

1. Name of the King

2. Death of the Worlds (WIP)

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Posted 18 September 2017 - 08:23 AM

Death of the Worlds (now ready)

Lokran Revolution Army is going to defend their lands from mighty enemies. First Secretary comrade Krazinskiy is leading his army to victory and trying to make peace in the whole planet. But forces of Jeronimus Ptein (monarchy descendants) abducted Krazinsky and performing diversions in several cities. Commissar Chehov, temporary leader of Revolution army asking help of his allies from other planets. Special group is coming to planet and trying to help release Krazinsky. But they still don`t know about secret allies of Ptein. Monarchy supporters are already sent message to Yotuns and their fleet is coming. Situation is now out of control.

and who will be you in this battle, comrade? )))

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Posted 10 October 2017 - 07:13 PM

I finished "Volcanorium", 10th work about my fantasy universe. 10th work and last work. So i must say, my universe is completed.

 

Posting there 1st part.

Other parts are private. If you want to get them, just send me pm to sanya.crohmal@yandex.ru (e-mail) or message there

 

if you don`t know, my fantasy universe consist of now 10 full stories (1000 pages)

 

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Part 1. Gods are Rising.

Mecus .... This world, as the ancient ignoramuses used to say, stood anciently on the Three Whales of the Divine .... Great Khaton, how foolish these fools were, that they were lying to everyone and distorting the truth. It even happened that the fire was burned for one mention of the planetary form of our world, the blessed and blessed Mekus. The sages tried to bring truth to these church ignoramuses, but those pagans believed them and punished them. How many wise men have laid their heads for the proof of the great truth! How many brave men tried to fight these fools! How many of them have been found at the hands of the executioners! God ..... And it's scary to think that these fanatics worked with great learned men and maidens. But only their bodies were flogged, only the bodies, but the souls were saved. They lighted their light-carrying liners on their chariots, and sent them straight to Khaton in his blessed abode. Then Khaton said to them, you fell into eternal paradise because they tried to convey the truth and were brave. And so by this you will become my liners in paradise hills, because you did not renounce your faith and did not lose heart in the presence of stupid creatures, and those careless beasts in human form that call themselves my ministers will forever smolder in worlds without light and fire , And till now they have appeared, that people of the good burned on the bonfires, realize how terrible their deeds were. And to this day these madmen and murderers languish in the great darkness, they do not know the light of either fire or heat. They are cursed forever. And those men that faith defended truthfully and truth were reported, the liters were rebelled from the fire. Blessed be Khaton, the great God of H'Shangar the Lightbearer, that he created us all and inhabited the universe with living entities. Blessed be he a thousand times for all ages and times! Blessed be H'Shangar! Blessed be their name!
Perhaps, it is necessary to me to continue further. No one almost knew how the tribe came to statehood. Ancient legends and myths have already been forgotten. But everyone knew that the first state, which rose from the darkness, was the great Laurasia. Great indestructible Laurasia. An ancient mighty kingdom, its castles were tall and beautiful, and the city streets are full of people and all kinds of dishes. This kingdom of famine did not know, since its lands were fertile, and the climate warm and affectionate for everyone. Then other kingdoms rebelled. Frankonis from many principalities was formed, having elected a single husband, that he was known as a knight. King Frankonis wisely governed and was friendly with the monarchs of Lavra. Then Iberia and its mountain lands rose from the darkness of ignorance and lawlessness. The new kingdom was formed in the mountains of the great, and to this day its kings dominate there and the agreements are held with the rest. Then Rusland went into the arena. This kingdom did not immediately come to peace and harmony within its own land. In the beginning, there were many princes there, that between themselves constantly fought. And they went on each other, crushing everything in their way. But this dark time ended, and the king came to power, one and powerful, that united that earth. Then all the men and maidens learned about the new states, which appeared as if in one day. Granddaughter Aldavia and Doritai, her neighbor, overcame strife and strife. In Doritai kagan came the great to power, and in Aldavia the princes elected a new elder, that took them under control and afterwards killed, and having killed them, declared himself the ruler of the one and became equal to the kings. Laurasia was considered the greatest of the kingdoms of this continent. After all, the continent was called that way. Khaton called him so blessed. He walked with his mighty staff through the land in time immemorial, and ordered him to name the continent in the north of Laurasia. But in this world there was not only one mainland. In the south, there were also lands. Khaton set his foot on the land of the south, and called them Hoarem. He connected the continents with a small isthmus, and this isthmus was for merchants and merchants. Alas ... the language of H'Shangaara is not clear to us to this day, and it is impossible to solve it in any way. But we will not encroach on God's knowledge. Blessed be H'Shangar! Blessed be their name!
About Hoarem I can not say kind words. Ever since the beginning of time all the time there, some conflicts have flared up. It was not peaceful. For the harvest struggled or for resources. Wars started for women, and death was everywhere. Not only people in the south lived, but also other beings. Khaton did not only inhabit the great human Mecus, but also other creatures, which he created then. The Neren sorcerers, who were famous for their purple, set up their villages west of their neighbors. The whole west of Hoarema was subject to them. The dogma dominions were in the east, and they had no unity with dog people. Intestine conflicts and contention. All the time there were wars and conflicts. The tribe on the tribe was advancing, but the race for the race. And all the south and the central lands of Hoarem were given to people. And people were there, perhaps, more terrible than any creatures from the world of darkness who came. A lot of conflicts were conducted there, but still after what time, unity was awakened in them. Then they created a great kingdom, called it Shirvastan. Khaton was not worshiped there, but faith was chosen quite different, different from ours. They decided to worship the Saints, great creatures of light and fire. But in the books of the Light-bearer, these Devas were never mentioned, so I do not believe in them in any way, ask me to forgive. In the far south, power was taken by ebony people, whose skin was blacker than tar, was. They created their principalities and kingdoms. There were many of them, but Zanesbar, Lahha and Gehry were considered famous. A little east of Nezia, and later they created the capital, calling it Shakarta. And this city was considered a city of great philosophies and numerous pagodas. And in Shirvastan, they thought about the capital for a long time. At first they talked about Jahadma-Palu, the city of stupas and temples. But after it was decided to make the capital in Amahur, a fortress great. This city was built to repel dogma dog attacks, and was known as the strongest indestructible. Its towers towered to the sky, and the walls were strong enough to withstand the bombardment of the rocket-propelled guns. That's all you can say about Hoarem. It was not quite there at the beginning of days. And what now ... And even in these days it lives there severely, uneasy. And people's lives can not be called happy.
Now I will tell you about the era of great achievements. And you should know only one thing. If it were not for those heroes mighty that our world has been preserved and left us all alive, I'm afraid that nothing would have happened. The world could just split into pieces. And our race with you will forever be lost. What would Khaton say then ... What would he have thought when he heard about the death of his planet and his loyal subjects. What the great H'Shangar would say, looking at thousands of debris that hovered in space by air. Perhaps we will not talk about this more. We will be transported during the period of the knight of mighty, that Rodrikom was called. Rodrik or Rorik. This knight was familiar to me. He was a brave man, and he helped us with his valor. But not only was Rodrik at the time, but also his blood brothers and faithful friends. About everything, I must tell you, while still alive. The Khaton blessed knows that I must tell this to you. And he will not take me back to the worlds of liners until I tell you everything. Be blessed be Khaton! Blessed be H'Shangar!
We will return in the year 23rd. At that time, the great Nikolai Laurasia was ruled. This king was mighty and courageous, but he was no less famous for his kindness. Nikolai had friendship with many of the rulers. And with Shirvastan he contracted the trade contract at the beginning of his reign. Sultan Zavahar considered Nicholas a worthy ruler. They met together in one of the magnificent gardens of the Amahur palace and conducted conversations. Wise was the sultan of Shirvastan, and many of the rulers of the mainland in the north believed that it was he who would put an end to the long-standing quarrels. After all, it happened that the Shirvan people came to the Laurasian lands with weapons and repaired robbery. There were also wars between Shirvastan and the northern kingdoms. Aldavia and Doritai centuries ago kept the whole horde sent by the sultan Urazam. Zavahar apologized to Nicholas for all his sins and mortal deeds, that he was inflicted by people for many centuries. With the Nerans, the ruler Amahursky kept the partnership and led the trade. But Nikolai did not much like Zavuhar's aspirations for friendship with sorcerers. The sultan of the great was invited to many people in Shirvastan, and with them many conversations supported about different topics. Zavuhar trusted wizards from the western lands of Hoarem, listened to them. And Nikolai noticed that this did not work for good. Zavukhar had only one wife. Her name was Farida, and her beauty, perhaps, was not on the whole Mekus. But here the grief happened. She was born with her, and Farida died, leaving behind only an eerie freak. The child was born of two heads and three legs, and was immediately stabbed. In a great grief there was then Zavuhar. He tore his hair, and did not know what to do. He had no more wives, and the long-awaited heir did not appear. After a while, Zavukhar learned that his neighbor, the king of Nairan, Alargar, had the same misfortune. The only spouse left this world, leaving behind a freak. Alargar, like his neighbor, ordered the guards to destroy this creature, that horror inspired anyone who looked at it. But the troubles of the Hoem's land did not end there either.
After the birth of the freaks and their slaughter, there were crop failures. The whole summer was raining, and the sun was not showing at all. In the south, there were floods that made real waterfalls in the lands of peasants. Thousands of villages have been demolished, and their inhabitants are buried under water. Then for a year the next drought came. The sun was shining so brightly that you could not look at it. The air was so hot that many were just choking. Many lakes and rivers that give life have dried up. Killed thousands and thousands of people. The darkness fell on Hoarem. Many unfortunate and destitute people went into pirates and robbed merchant ships. Robbers have appeared in the forests a lot. On the rivers prevailed ushkuynikov domination. But not only Hoarem suffered a grief, but also Laurasia. From the far north, the savages and marauders descended to the lands of Rusland and Laurasia. They did violence and people ate. Villages and villages were attacked by terrible barbarians. They did not just kill those unfortunate people, but even devoured them. Torn out their eyes and tongues. Cut stomachs and internal organs scattered everywhere. Nightmares terrified all people and their roommates. Another thing to tell about the garden, which was planted by King Louis Frank. This garden was so magnificent that many kings and kings came to marvel at its beauties. But he was dead and dead. For one night, the trees just died out, and even experienced gardeners could not explain what caused this grief. Many old female spellcasters, who lived in quiet villages, began to talk about the spoiling, sent from Shirvastan and the southern lands. But no one believed them, since there was no war with Shirvastan and the lands of Hoarem. There were no conflicts and conflicts. Nobody trusted the old women, taking all of them for the mad frenzy of hell. And in vain .... They were fools that did not hear the prophecy of the leaders.
And after all these nightmares came news of strange sorcerers. It all began in the Nairen lands, where the first wise men appeared. Wizards of this faith preached a strange, arisen, as they themselves said, from the spheres of the cosmic. There was talk about a new god, whose name was hidden. They just called it the Greatest. The greatest of the Gods. Another was his name, the Four-Tried Baby. They penetrated not only into the Nærén kingdom, but also into other lands. In Shirvastan, they flooded with a great flow, gathering their own supporters. Promises they promised false. They said to the villagers that the Greatest of the Gods would save them all, feed them and give them drink. But in return, they should have renounced the old faith and recognize the new dominion. The Magi-false teachers of the southern lands flooded like locusts. Especially they were full in the lands of ebony people. They managed to persuade all the dark-skinned people to take their side. And the savages from Gehry and Lhasa began to visit the neighbors to the north and beat them to death. The robberies began in the south of Shirvastan. And the news began to penetrate everywhere. Laurasia was not an exception, and soon there came King Louis of Franconis. He decided to call on Nikolai to visit him and tell him everything at once. The king of Franconis became agitated. He was worried in his heart. For the first time such it was seen by the great Nikolai of Laurasia.
Ludovic arrived immediately in Laparna, the capital of Laurasia. Nicholas met him with his soldiers at the door of the castle and led him to his chambers. Knights of his Louis left to feast with the guards of his companion. The very same king of Franconis wanted to talk with his brother in private. He did not leave anybody a witness. Even me, the monk, was sent to the castle cell. About what happened, I learned only after. All servants and knights guarding both kings were forced to retire. And then he sat down on an armchair, upholstered with the skin of a bear, straightening his coat and hat with feathers. But Nicholas sat opposite him. Both looked really great. Their camisoles shone with purity, and the feathers on their hats impressed everyone with their beauty. But the great men of Laurasia were not surprised at each other, but for hard conversations.
"Have you heard about what is happening in the lands of the Shirvastan?" said the mighty Lyudovik.
To which Nikolai answered him the truth.
"Only only distantly, my friend." "I do not have eyes and ears everywhere." "Do I look like Shkata?"
He also mentioned Robert, that he became a Doranic kagan then. Robert was from brave men. He carried in himself two bloods - the laurasian and the Doritic, and declared himself a ruler, like the rest of the brethren of the Laurasian. And he wore a hat and a polished coat, and even wore a sword at his waist like a real grand from Iberia.
"So, you started talking about the Scale," continued his King Frankonis, referring to his brother, "Robert told me everything, he and Shirvastan have a friendship." Our spies were worried about him.
"About these sorcerers?" the great Nikolai asked immediately, "So I know, let these wizards with their Greatest of the Gods remain in Shirvastan, they will not touch us, and if they do, they will burn them in a flash." I heard about their sacrifices. But these are not our problems, these are Shirvastan cases, and I did not hear Zavukhar calling for help. "
"So far, he did not call," Louis replied, "But soon he will call." The wizards of these devils set up southern possessions against the sultan.In the Nairen kingdom they managed to stir up riots against Allargar and spread their faith everywhere.The statues of the Greatest of the Gods are erected throughout the south of Hoarem The terrible priests put the unfortunate on the sacrificial tables and stab.Many are cut off by scalps and heads, and with the blood of the servants they are blotting themselves from head to toe.This is done with those who deny the Greatest of the Gods. they bring Robert's spies and Robert immediately came to Paris and told me everything personally, and then told the spies to repeat their information they had obtained, I heard everything enough, now I'm with you. "I tell you, trouble is coming to our gates" .
Then the great Nicholas thought. He was silent for two minutes or maybe more. He sipped a few sips from a jar from Brandy from English, and then only decided to speak. For a long time he had to think through all the phrases. These information did not inspire any hope. But he was well aware that in Laurasia another is a concern. The barbarians from the north attacked the peasants' possessions, and the Laurasia army had to defend itself from an eerie enemy. In the south, there were always wars, and Hoarem residents, as a rule, solved these issues on their own, without external interference. Zavukhar Janissaries had a lot, and he could fight with them even with giants from myths.
"It's not our concern," Nikolai said at the time, "In the south they have all the time enmity and violence, and Zavukhar has a strong army there, I myself attended his Janissary parade, and saw their skills, they will keep these sorcerers" .
"Paul-Shirvastan is already in the war," said the governor, "Warlocks raise up." They call for the overthrow of the old regime and deny the belief in the Devas. "The Nairin kingdom is already mired in the slaughter." Shirvastan suppresses riots as best as possible. "Zavuhar calls on thousands of his warriors to protect the empire, but the peasant insurgencies do not cease, and ebony people are climbing from all sides. "Dogmat gangsters, too, do not want to indulge in their own affairs, but attack the eastern sanjaks." Chakos overtakes Shirvastan and its surrounding lands. power. I, too, think about it. We are together so judged. If villainy not subside, we will send the army to help Shirvastanu ".
The lord of the Laurasian nodded to his companion and friend. He did not interfere with the decision of Louis, and had no right. But at the same time he remained with his opinion and did not dare change it.
"We have some troubles here with barbarians," Nikolai said at the time, "The barbarians from the north, the hordes from Nordian are climbing to our lands, ruining villages of peasants, we have to fight with them, especially since the Russian tsar has already learned about this. Marauders and assassins penetrate into his domain as well: King Peter set up bush regiments along all the borders, the threat of the attacks of the barbarians has already become serious, and you are talking about sorcerers, if Zavukhar personally asks me to take part in his quarrels, then I will appear with a huge army And meanwhile, I believe, the Janissaries will be able to okrushit horde. In the end, the rebels are not warriors, as I see. They're after simple ploughmen and farmers. "
But he objected to his companion, Louis, for he still did not tell. Not all the truth was known to the great King of Laurasia. Not too much information still rushed over his head.
"Not only the peasants revolt against Zavuhar," said the ruler of Franconis, "But the soldiers." Many Shirvastan warriors among the villagers have roots, and they do not want to kill their fathers and mothers. They stand on the side of the tillers. "Several Azabov regiments have already turned from the true and the warlords went over to the insurgents, now wizards are in charge of them. "Warlocks and civilians." The civil war had already struck at Shirvastan, and Zavukhara would not be prevented from helping in the struggle with the hellish devils. "The servants of the Greatest God spread everywhere. Robert himself is in great terror, even in his possession there have been a few of the litigants, three have already been hanged, and five are searched in all the forests and mountains. "This is what is happening in the southern lands, my brother."
The great sorrow struck Nicholas at that moment. After all, Robert's land was very near. Laurasia bordered on Doritas from time immemorial. In the last centuries of wars between Dorait and its neighbors, it almost never happened. And it was peaceful there everywhere. But the information about the sorcerers, which appeared quite near, seriously alarmed the great ruler. However, the army did not dare to send troops. He waited for a special moment ... But in vain .... Though he is our king, and I appreciate and respect him, but he would better send his warriors then, and they would suppress the uprisings in the south.
"I will leave my soldiers here for now," said the King of Laurasia to Louis, "But if Zabukhar sends his ambassadors and says that I will come, I will come at once." Meanwhile, the barbarians are interfering with the kingdom, and it is necessary to sort them out, but only there is a question One, just in case, is there any leader of these warlocks? Well, maybe some kind of "holy warrior" who would consider himself a messiah. "Do they have a leader or several?"
Nikolay seriously worried about such events. He nevertheless wished to learn from his comrade-in-arms more information about all the leaders of the uprising. It is better to know this now than later. After all, "later" could not come.
"They have a lot of Lihodov," replied the ruler of the city of Ludovik, "So far there are five, one calls himself Mirtan Shkhar, and the second is called Milan." The third magician may not be a husband, but a virgin. "He calls himself a Black Lotus. all with a dagger with poison and makes terrible rituals.The fourth leader of the uprising is not a magician at all, but a simple man called Zarheb Kovadzho, he was known by the Magaraj until he was betrayed by the Sultan, and now he and his host have become witches for wizards. The Greatest of the Gods rules them, but there are also five th. The fifth magician. dangerous of all ... his name was hard to get. Shkatov lost two of their spies. "
Nikolai was shocked at the flow of information that came from his colleague and friend. And he praised mentally the spies of Robert, that brave men were known. They managed to penetrate too deeply into the southern lands and obtained many valuable messages. In the eyes of Nicholas, they were real heroes. These warriors were worthy of the highest praise.
"The name of the fifth magician is very unusual," King Franck said at the time, "His name is Devil Rowling, but his name is strange, no one knows, and the spies of Robert spent a lot of time trying to get into the ranks of the rebels We are very fortunate that we generally know all this, otherwise we would be in ignorance, but it's okay if I go to my husbands.It's time for Paris to go back.I'm sorry, I'm not going to stay long, and I'll spend the night in the diligence. "
Ludovic's eyes were saddened with sorrow. Woe is great in them settled. He did not even want to taste the delicious dishes in the castle of Nicholas. He just hurried back. Bowed to his brother Louis and his hand shook him hard. And then he went quickly to his horses, that they were waiting for him outside the castle. Minutes did not pass, as the ruler of Frankon and his knights left the abode of Nicholas. They hurried back to Paris, for their delays could bring misfortune. They dared not rejoice and feast in these terrible years. Louis was not only a wise man, but also a seer. He knew that he would soon be in the south, and knew that it was no longer possible to delay.
But Nikolai the same Laurasian and remained in the castle at home. So much information drove him mad, that he did not go out to see his brother. They said good-bye right in his chambers. Nikolai did not have a face, as people say. His wife, Ophelia Redhead, tried to calm down for a long time. But the Laurasian ruler did not come to himself for a long time. He had long thought about the words of Louis Franck. He turned them all inside his chapter. And he felt too strange when he heard the name "Rofling". And the king felt a great chill in his heart. And this cold pervaded him so much that he had to wrap himself up in a fur cloak, although on the street, meanwhile, it reigned warmly. No one could console the King of Laurasia. Neither his children nor his wife. Everything was in vain for weeks.
And after two weeks passed, savages again fell upon the lands of the Laurasian from the north. As the spies said, the barbarian king now headed the shaman. He was elected by local elders among the brave warriors. And they say he was not just a warrior, but even a magician. His father was a shaman, and his mother was a local leader. The name of this scoundrel was Coerunas.
He gathered the clans all under the same banner. And thousands and thousands of savage hordes flooded the northern lands. The villages burned these pagans, and the inhabitants mercilessly pinned. Rumors also circulated about how the barbarians of the damned peasants slaughtered and ate corpses in slaughterhouses. The news reached the king. Horrible news. Such a whirlwind of barbarian hordes did not know the Laurasian land. Everything was shaking even in Rusland. King Peter conducted several battles against savage troops, and many of his warriors went into oblivion. But still reflected the first wave. And Coerunas, the damned sorcerer, ordered to drive away his people, in order to send them to battle. As the Russian warriors said, these barbarians fought even half-dead. They were cut to pieces, chopped, but they seemed to be inanimate, inserted again and smashed. Berserkov had a lot in the battle that fought even without hands and feet. Nightmares began in the north. And the great magic came. Coerunas brought the plague to the Russian soldiers, which began to cover their camps and jails. And the warriors killed those thousands.
Then the king decided to send a messenger to the venerable Hilda. Although she was already old, she was forty-three years old, but she looked like an angel. As they say, the king loved her once. But she did not take her husband Khaylan. And the husband then disappeared in the forests of the Bregaian. The hounds said that Khailan simply vanished like a magician, but no one believed them. At first they thought that the king had decided so. But then the king came to Hilda and confessed himself that there had been no murder. He does not know what happened to Khailan. Sir Khailan was a noble knight, was missing, and no one knows where he is now and what has become of him. But in the present days the king did not even think at all that Hilda would embrace. He sent his messenger, so that her sons could call for service. Sir Rodric and Sir Gunderic immediately rushed to the king. And they fell on their knees, proved their loyalty. And Nicholas the venerable took them to the service. Sir Rodric was sent to the frontier to Alphonse, Count Norland. And Gunderic went to the embassy, ​​where he became the bodyguards of the King's envoys. Nicholas decided to double the protection of all embassies that were in different countries. Sir Gunderik was sent to the lands of Shirvastan, so that the lives of the great ambassador and all his secretaries could be saved. He was appointed head of the guard at the Lavraziysky Embassy, ​​which was in the Amahur hail. But Sir Rodrik, being a wonderful swordsman, went north. Count Norland immediately noticed his ability to wield the sword. And just a week later, Sir Rodric on a dashing horse in armor, with a sword and a pike, carried across the expanses of the northern lands.
The order was royal, to find and destroy Coerunas. The spies of Alphonse found out that this scoundrel was in one of the looted villages. This barbarian has just finished with all the inhabitants that were there. He personally tore his eyes clawed at his hand. And his terrible warriors brutalized the wretched of the unfortunate. As soon as the spies reported to the count about finding enemies, he immediately snatched his battle blade. He looked at all the knights and his soldiers. He especially looked at Rodrik, that he had already become famous as the best swordplayer. He looked into their eyes with a fierce look.
"So, my valiant sirs," came a rumbling voice from the earl of the earl, "Today is the battle of the day." Our Koreans are in a neighboring village, and there are plenty of his warriors, but we have cavalry, and this inspires, and barbarians do not ride horses. They do not even know the wheel, so let's take this fight and kill everyone, and if we find Coerunas, we'll cut off his head and put him on the peak, and after that we'll send the enemy's head. the enemy, that's the damned murderer, that he sent so many innocents to the slaughterhouse! "
"Hurray! Hooray! Hooray!", - answers were heard from all sides, "Long live the king! Long live Laurasia!".
But not immediately the brave knights went on the campaign. As soon as Alphonse's speech came to an end, the horns from the east side were heard. As it turned out, the king himself sent help. Ten gunners and twenty petrinels arrived to the aid of the Count and his soldiers. Petrineers-criminals held "sticks of sticks" in their hands, as the people called them. The guns were recharging a long, but death carried to any adversary. Two guns arrived, which also promised a lot ahead of victories. Two guns were created recently, and the king decided to try them out. In the end, damn enemies, that from the north arrived, the best that is for testing. The barbarians decided to shoot.
Good valued Alphonse guns arrived and twenty riflemen said so as not to miss. On which the archers nodded their heads. They were not from the timid dozen. They shot from their guns, better than from bows and from gunshots. And they were not equal. Soon, the warriors went on a campaign. Sir Rodric Banner carried the regiment. He was a brave man, a great warrior. Fear did not know, he did. Even Gunderic sometimes admired his precious brother. And among the knights around Sir Rodric called respect. But there were, of course, those warriors who were envious of Rodrik's fame, and some wished him dead. But this usually always happens. Everywhere and everywhere there are cursed envious persons. Khaton, you'd better send them all to the darkness! Be blessed be Khaton! Blessed be H'Shangar!
Only an hour passed, and the mighty knights overtook the enemy's camp. Koerunas himself with his soldiers was entrenched in a lost village. There were at least five thousand of them there. And the knights of Laurasia decided to advance from the hill. At first they decided to parrot the savage warriors. Pushkarskie troops opened fire from the guns. Kernels flew into the enemies of the damned. Killed at once not less than a hundred. The beastlike enemies noticed Pushkar positions. And they rushed to run in their direction. But then the shot was given to the petrinali. From the guns flew fiery whirlwinds. And a couple of hundred barbarians instantly fell. However, then the guns stopped firing, and petrilists were given an order to withdraw. Meanwhile, the brave sirs with Alfonso the Count and the mighty Rodric, decided to get around the damned from the flanks. And so, as soon as the savages rushed to run after the gunners, the entire cavalry regiment struck them in the rear. And thousands of enemies perished overnight. After all, the knights of Laurasia did not spare the damned. They razed them with spears, swords and axes. Rodrik himself killed most of the enemies in the battle. They praised Khaton the Light-bearer! And the name of his scoundrels was amazed! The priest was among the great warriors. And he fought not with a sword, but with a rod. Razdrablival limbs to enemies.
While all the knights were fighting savages, Sir Rodrik noticed one of the scoundrels that stood out. It was none other than Koerunas himself. He waved his two-handed ax and cut off his legs to his horses. He knocked the knights out of the mares, threw them to the ground, and then slaughtered them like cattle. He chopped the three Laurasian husbands to pieces. But he did not stop there either. He began to shred his head further. And there was a fountain of blood. Rodzik faced a terrible sight. And this scoundrel stood out not only with the ax, but with other accessories. He was dressed in chain mail and a cloak of mammoth skins. On his head was a mighty helmet with a high spire. His beard was bloodier than his. And the neck covered a necklace, monstrous and incredibly terrible. From the eyeballs, he decided to pull the necklace to show his greatness to the enemies. Sir Rodric could not stand the sight of such a thing, and pushed himself forward. From the horse, he jumped down and hit the barbarian sword across the helmet with all his might. Coerunas retreated back, dropping an ax. Rodrik knew that the enemy owns the magic, and it would be better for him to dodge the attacks of the bastard more often. As a noble knight thought, it happened. Koerunas threw a ball into it from the fire. He flew out suddenly, but Rodrik dodged in time, and the fireball exploded behind him.
"You can not beat us, boy," came a raspy voice from the savage's mouth, "No one can do it."
"No," answered the noble knight, "It's not for you to defeat us, barbarian." You'll pay today for all your deeds. "Khaton is a witness, he sees everything."
"Khaton is your dust, and corruptible!" roared in the throat of Coerunas. "He's been dead for a long time!"
No sooner had Rodrik come to his senses than in the hands of the savage was the same ax. The wizard cursed managed to attract him only by the power of thought. But this knight was not broken. He exposed the blade in front of him and beat off the blows of the terrible enemy. And Coerunas continued his onslaught. He tried to cut the head off the enemy, but nothing came of it. The man was Sir Rodric. A wonderful and powerful warrior, he fought desperately and bravely.
"Do not tell you nasty things about Khaton!" then Sir Rodrik shouted fiercely, "You are a barbarian! You do not know anything!".
"No, you do not know that!" - the answer of the enemy was heard, "The greatest of the Gods will kill you all!".
And with these words the enemy burned with this mighty flame. His whole body flushed like a torch. His ax turned into a fiery blade. From the eyes of the savage leader, the scarlet streams flew out, they wanted to descend on the knight of Laurasia. But Rodrick jumped aside in time. Overcoming horror and confusion, Sir Rodric flew to the enemy, like crows. With all its scope, he struck a burning creature in the stomach and cut it through. As soon as the sword of Laurasia of her husband stabbed into the body of the savage king, then in a flash the flame of his inferno was extinguished. Once again, Coerunas became a man. He seized the blade, trying to pull it out of his body, but nothing happened. And so, the savage leader just collapsed to the ground. But blood did not flow from his body. It instantly turned into ashes and dissolved into frosty air.
Sir Rodric smiled for a moment. After all, he managed to end the monster cursed. He killed today the enemy of the great, that terror inspired everyone. But hardly remembered the knight about the words of the murdered savage king, then the joy instantly evaporated from him. After all, this Coerunas about his God did not just say so. He said about the one whom the Greatest of the Gods in the south is called. And it's no accident happened. Not at all. Who was this Greatest God, did not know then Sir Rodric. But he knew the information about the south very well. He knew the secrets, for his house was near to the king. And Hilda is his mother, she knew Nicholas for a long time. Now Sir Rodrik understood everything. All these barbarians, coming from the north, did not just come here.
"Rodrik!" - heard from behind the cries of the soldiers of Laurasia, "Rodrik Rodrik!"
He killed the knights of this mighty enemy, which was called Koerunas. And all the brave soldiers saw it. Only jubilation and joy did not visit the soul of the knight in those moments. He remained standing in the field, looking at a pile of black sand. It was the ashes of that same scoundrel. And he was associated with sorcerers. Not just sent him here. It is possible that Coerunas himself was not at all of the northern kind. Perhaps the one who was called the Devil Rolfing, sent him to the lands of the marauders, in order to tune them against all neighboring kingdoms.
When Alphonse came close to his knight, he again looked him in the eyes, as then, in the tent before the battle. And he saw great sadness in Rodrik's eyes. He decided to speak with a mighty warrior. He felt something was wrong. After all, the commander was not at all fools. And whether he was with Nikolai during a conversation with the king of Frankon, he personally would insist on sending troops to the lands of the south. He felt a great threat coming from Hoarem. Great, still invisible ..... And he saw an invisible connection with the invasions of the barbarians.
"Did you hear something?" - then asked the count-general, "This Coerunas told you something?".
"Yes," Rodrik replied at once, "I think it will be interesting for the king."
"Interestingly?" Then Alphonse asked in bewilderment.
But the knight did not say anything. He just showed what he saw. Not all savage leader turned to dust. He left behind him something that could bring much evidence. On a bloody snow near a pile of black sand lay a small statuette. Alfonz was about to touch her, but Rodrik squeezed his hand instantly. The statuette lay there for a reason. She portrayed a terrible child. The baby with a terrible face and four horns in his head. It would seem that her eyes looked directly into the souls of Alphonse and his knight. And this diabolical view was truly terrible. He pierced the cold sweat immediately.
"Do not touch, my commander," came the words of Sir Rodrick, "She's dangerous, she's witching."
Alphonse nodded at it. But he knew perfectly well that he must get to the king. A figurine of a boy with horns and an eerie demonic face was picked up by a regimental priest. He neatly wrapped it in a bag and hid it from unnecessary eyes. The order was clear. Go back to the city. The war was over in the north. Now it was necessary to return to the king and tell about everything that was.
But the war was not over at Mekus. Monstrous forces were approaching this planet. The whole south has already bowed before the rulers of hell. And a new war has come, much more terrible than that conflict in the northern land.

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Posted 10 October 2017 - 08:22 PM

TOO much content!

Great work man. You are indeed devoted to your endeavours.


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Posted 10 October 2017 - 08:26 PM

Yeah i made my work very hard. I didn`t sleep a lot of nights in this year.


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