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#1 TotalWarDestroyer

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Posted 15 January 2018 - 12:17 AM

Hey guys. I was told to give an example of my writing here, as you guys need a few hero descriptions. I'll give a few of those.

 

 

Thrawn

Admiral Thrawn is a Chiss male who serves the Empire as Grand Admiral.

Thrawn has knowledge of the uncharted outer rim territories, making him a valuable asset to the Empire.

Beyond this knowledge, the Admiral has supreme knowledge in the art of war, which he utilizes, and sharpens on a daily basis.

The Admiral credits much of his success to his study of his opponents' culture.

Thrawn is the first alien to make the rank of Grand Admiral in the Empire.

Thrawn nearly denied the rank, expressing concerns about the Death Star, which he thought may be used against his home.

Thrawn would later reunite a large portion of the Empire, and fight his way to Couruscaunt, where he would be repelled in an arduous battle.

In battle, Thrawn commands the 'Chimaera', an Imperial I Star Destroyer.

The Admiral can Direct his fleet's fire, and boost his own ship's speed.

 

Darth Maul

Darth Maul is a sith who serves the Emperor as an assassin.

Maul was bested in combat by Obi Wan Kenobi when Maul underestimated his foe.

The Sith is a very physical fighter who can leap into combat, destroying his foe.

He can also crush a vehicle with his anger, killing those inside.

Maul is the leader of the Shadow Collective.

 

 



#2 evilbobthebob

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Posted 15 January 2018 - 01:34 AM

I appreciate the effort you've put in, and the brevity is also good. However, I need text that doesn't require much in the way of editing, and you misspelled the name of a major planet, Coruscant. How much have you played of Phoenix Rising?


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#3 TotalWarDestroyer

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Posted 15 January 2018 - 01:54 AM

I have not yet played much of P.R., but I have played Thrawn's revenge quite a bit. As for Coruscant, yes, I see that. I'll make sure to reread it all three times over for the mod though, as I know it is essential to get done correct the first time around for a successful mod.

 

I know this is going to sound Unprofessional, but Coruscant is the #1 misspell for me in the Star Wars Universe. Not many things catch me like that one. 

 

Within a day or two, expect that number of P.R. playtime to go up drastically and exponentially. Also, no hurt feelings if you decline my offer, I understand fully the concerns.

 

-T.W.D. 



#4 TotalWarDestroyer

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Posted 15 January 2018 - 01:56 AM

Also, take notice that I can adjust to meet certain standards, if you need more detail on a character's personality, I can do that, if you need less text, I can reduce it without losing quality of the description.



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Posted 15 January 2018 - 03:14 AM

Okay. Take your time, see what heroes we have in PR and learn about them, and I'll send you a list and what format I'll need the descriptions in once you've practiced some more.


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Posted 15 January 2018 - 03:31 AM

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