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#1 BagaturKhan

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Posted 04 May 2018 - 03:31 PM

Hello again friends.

 

as you know, i started to work with newest universe, new updated universe. All my old projects are now having another name - Old Canon. But i am working now with the New Canon project.

http://www.moddb.com...lscior-canon-nc - My New Canon group.

 

Now i`m working with story "Pandemiah". (second name "Pandemic") Its a big story, part of the "Universe 2596" period.

All information about my other periods, you can see in my Moddb blog or in my Moddb New Canon group. There i need to post only information about "Pandemiah" story.

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This story is about "Universe 2596" Period.

Now i`m going to write about event in the planet Castambol. Year is 2596 AD. United Pacificators Association, who calles itself as The Order, is trying to stop terrible epidemy in the planet Castambol. Epidemy origin is not explored. This secret alien virus is transforming all life forms and going to corrupt the whole planet. But Castambol government is going to be against this "anti-virus" operation. Pacificators are friends only for several states, but Castambol Federation Republic had conflicts with Order organisation, and Order even put them under sanctions. Chancellor Deinz Zitler and president Ludwig von Karsten thinking that main culprit of the virus propagation is... Order, and this is attempt of destroying the Castambol nation. Politics.... Epidemy.... Propaganda..... Cruelty..... and Safety..... Who will save the Castambol people? Who will stop this terrible alien virus? and who will stop this Cold war between Order and chancellor Zitler?

This story will really be Global story. I never wrote something like that. Never did it. But i`m trying to write this in my best. Now i am working with it.

Soon its will be here. And this story can really be my Breakthrough of this year.... or Crushing defeat.

 

If you have some questions about it, write it there. 

But also here in this thread, i am planning to post some New Canon articles and information about main characters.

 

Always glad to speak about my universe there. And always glad to hear new ideas.

 

Thanks anyway.

 

Regards Alexander Krokhmal

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Posted 04 May 2018 - 05:34 PM

This is an interesting premise for a story. What do you have in store? Is the virus similar to zombies or something else entirely?  



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Posted 04 May 2018 - 05:47 PM

Indeed it seems like a solid and serious work. :thumbsuphappy:

I like the background as well - sounds like an alternative post-apocalyptic setting.

 

Alex, please invest some more time on the characters, so that to flesh them out really neat.

A story is at its peak, when the heroes and the antagonists have clear motives and well-developed personalities.

Your story definitely has dramatic elements, so the struggle of the characters should be worked well. This way readers will be immersed into the plot :twisted:


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Posted 04 May 2018 - 07:52 PM

Is the virus similar to zombies or something else entirely?  

 

 

 

Its not even zombie virus, but much more cruel and evil. Its virus from the Dark Worlds. But the main thing of this virus you will know after the story will be ready.

 

This story can be my Big Victory of this year... or crushing defeat, as i said.

 

I am trying to use UNIQUE ideas, really original. I am not borrowing anything from other universes. I even don`t borrow something from my favourite 40k. 

I am working with really original thing.

 

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and of course my story have many politics ;)

but i think, its not bad, its good :)


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Posted 05 May 2018 - 02:11 AM

 

and of course my story have many politics ;)

 
but i think, its not bad, its good :)

It deepens the lore, enriching the experience.



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Posted 05 May 2018 - 11:32 AM

Information about the factions of this story.

 

Order of Father (2596). 
Small article about the Order, pacificators organisation from the "Universe 2596" period.

Order of Father was created by the glorious leaders of mankind and other civilizations. No one can oppose, that Order is part of the UN faction, which was powerful in the Earth planet in the period of 21 century. The second name of Order is - Intergalactic Pacificators Organisation of the United Races. Not only humans taking part in the Order development, but many alien races too. Order have central and powerful government, which have name as Grand Capitolium and of course, the supreme ruler Grossmeisster. Grossmeister rank is not like in monarchy system, its more like in democracy level. All supreme rulers were chosen from the notorious human leaders. There was no even one event, when Grossmeister was alien, because this job is only for human representatives, for glorious and powerful humans. Order have a lot of psyonic regiments in their system. Psyonic creatures are more powerful then ordinary and can make more work then others, so Grand Capitolium is consist of only psyonic "wizards". Main idea of Order - is making peace in the whole universe. But many Order enemies calling this organisation as the Shadow Tyrants System. Order have powerful space fleet, representatives in the all governments, very high level of economics and good soldiers. Its indeed the powerful force of the universe, and sometimes agressive force.

 

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Information about the Castambol Federation, mighty state of the universe. 

Human state, which have now Cold War with Order (2596)

 

Name of the state:
Castambol Federal Republic

Name of the capital planet:

Castambol

Name of the capital city:
Klauzenfoort

Government structure:
Parliament republic

Main leaders:
Federal chancellor Deinz Zitler
Federal president Ludwig von Karsten

Population:
More then 50 billion people

Main race:
Humans

Other race representatives:

Dogmars, Aran`Guto, Croco, Lapi`Nars and etc.

Space colonies except capital planet:
Grossberg, Fulberg, Aaronburgh, Kenigsvran, Sergeevski

Main religion:
Khatonism

Money system:
Castambol euro

Official language:
Castambolese (part of the Mitgartr language, hybrid of german, norwich and english)

Relationships with Order and Earth Alliance:
Near terrible

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Edited by BagaturKhan, 05 May 2018 - 11:33 AM.

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Posted 06 May 2018 - 08:32 PM

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This is information about new villain of the New Canon. New villain, except Excelscior the Greatest, Zoran and Cerberum The Chaotic.

I must say, that i added to my universe new villain. Now just a minute saying about the old evil characters. As you remember, i already had two main villains of the Hyperborean Period - Excelscior The Greatest (terrorist, who wanted to create own dictature empire), Zoran (cruel fanatic and creator of evil machines) and Cerberum The Chaotic (leader of the daemons legions and champion of Dark World).

Now we are going into the "Universe 2596" period. There is a different timeline, but its have many connections with old periods. Melchior -is a new villain. He is secret agent of the Dark World. And he will of course take part in the "Pandemiah" story.

Now i need to stop make spoilers and let you all to wait some days. Soon you will see the finished story "Pandemiah" and read the new plotline.

Have a nice day.!!!


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Posted 07 May 2018 - 02:04 AM

I'am getting a better idea of the universe. There's a lot of potential!



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Posted 07 May 2018 - 05:18 PM

Thank you, my friend! ;)

 

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Now need to introduce characters of the "Pandemiah" story. Some characters, of course.

Here you are some heroes.

 

Order of Father:

(Pacificators 2596)

 

Group Captain Gennadius "Clockmaster"

First leutenant Jezikeel

Group Captain Bogdan Pahmutov

First leutenant Sharsan

Group Captain Orfei Maximus 

Protostrator Javaharlal Singh

 

Elf`Urr Empire:

(alien allies of Order)

 

Vice-admiral Ahmonet

Great ruler Senuhsert

Officer Azrael

Flagship Captain Menhotep

Special agent Totkhemris User`Kaff

Officer Dirael

 

Castambol Federation:

 

Federal president Ludwig von Karsten

Federal kantzler Deinz Zitler

Secretary Hliterz Geizeriks

Colonel Pitzel

Hauptmann Sigmund

Ambassador baron Vaviloff

Commander Arthemius

 

Dragon Empire:

 

Captain Ser`Jandaris

Prime-commander Ser`Azzrai

Ambassador Lariket

 

"Darkness" Terroristic Organisation:

(main evil)

 

Prime-commander Gabin Gabinovic

Prime-commander Habib

Sheih Al-Fardashian

Officer Jacob

Supreme leader Melchior 

 

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For now thats all. As i said, its only half list of all heroes there. About each hero you can know only from story.

Story will be ready very soon, friends. Its now near the release.


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Posted 07 May 2018 - 07:05 PM

Nice and comprehensive Heroes list!!!

Alex remember to invest some time into fleshing out them. Small perks, or character flaws, way of speaking, main characteristic (cynical, trustworthy, sneaky, virtuous, ironic, egoist, optimistic, rebel etc!)


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#11 BagaturKhan

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Posted 07 May 2018 - 07:51 PM

Every literature hero must be... living form hero ;)

I knew it since i was 12 years old. So yeah... i am working with their souls and characters.

 

For example, vice-admiral Ahmonet (its SHE, not him), is a very beautiful, but really strong commander of the Elf`Urr space fleet. She can be very strict or even agressive, but within she is a very wise and kind for all her people and loyal servants. She will never leave her brother-warriors and sister-warriors too.

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:49 AM

"Pandemiah" story have a proem. (if you didn`t know)

 

quote from my article 1 May 2018.

 

""The Beginning is now there" story is finished. 

Story about 26 century Period, which have name as "Universe 2596".

Now had inspiration and made a story about .... proem to "Pandemiah" story.
"The Beginning is now there" - is a short story with small text. But its describes the whole situation in the Castambol planet. There you can find information about the Cold War between the Order and Castambol Federation. There you can see the secret agents of villain, which have almost full control on prime-minister`s administration. Its a short story... but with golden point within.

Now i`m waiting the inspiration flood. When it will come, i`ll continue my "Pandemiah" story and finish it.

Thanks for reading this."

 

Inspiration flood is of course in my mind now. So now all is normal. :)

"Pandemiah" story will be release very soon, friends. Very soon!


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Posted 08 May 2018 - 03:26 PM

Cool, happy writing man!



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Posted 09 May 2018 - 08:08 AM

Full release of this story will be 11-12 may. Just wait a bit, friends!


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Posted 09 May 2018 - 05:39 PM

What you will see in my "Pandemiah" story very soon.....

 

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i must again repeat about the plotline. Don`t forget, its a story about the New Canon of my universe.


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Posted 11 May 2018 - 10:30 AM

Story "Pandemiah" will be released with other 2 stories of Hyperborean Period - "Unholy Lord" and "Unholy Prophet". 

If you want to understand the age of "Pandemiah", you must know old ages of the universe.

 

if you didn`t know, i have many stories about Hyperborean Period already. Here you are.

 

1. Unholy Lord

2. Unholy Prophet

3. Once Upon a Time

4. War is coming.

5. The last day of Azis.

6. Snare for the Mad guys.

7. Revenge of the N`Sai

8. Ionaphanus

9. Wrath of the Ancients

10. Primus Empire

11. Mors Venit.

12. Death of the Shahdom.


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Posted 12 May 2018 - 08:02 PM

Release of this story will be 14 May 2018 year.

Its delayed, i know. But i need to finish the ending scenes. 

 

I already posted Prologue in many forums. There i don`t know must i post or not, because Prologue is ... in russian language for now.


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Posted 14 May 2018 - 04:05 PM

Just wait a bit time. Its going to be completely finished. 
Its will be the most great story in my history, i hope.

Now i`m going to tell about some secrets.

 

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I. Plot will be concentrated on Castambol planet, capital of the Federal Republic.

II. Main villains will be two. Terrorists leader Gabinovic and his secret boss Herr Melchior, warlord-general of the "Darkness" organisation.

III. You will see not only virus propagation, but something more cruel.

IV. Main heroes will be from Order of Father organisation, Pacificators forces of the XXVI century.

V. You will see not only human heroes, but aliens too.

VI. Epic battles... and space nazis. Its will be soon!

Just wait a bit. Its coming now.


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Posted 16 May 2018 - 12:36 PM

Now my story "Pandemiah" is officially released.

 

See my official videos about it

 

This video is for english-speaking people

 

and this is for russian people

 

Thanks anyway for information.

 

If you wants me to send you my story "Pandemiah" , just write me PM there and say your email.

I`ll send it you with a great pleasure.

 

I think, you will not be dissappointed in it. Thank you again.


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Posted 16 May 2018 - 10:07 PM

I think it is good you are taking time away from the people and their comments. Hope it helps you in rediscovering inspiring! Happy writing!






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