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#21 MusketMarine

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Posted 18 February 2020 - 08:48 AM

 

I decided to take a break from writing the main story, and make some unit cameos, this time I decided to make all of the Stolen Tech units for the Boneyard, when it infiltrates another faction, and itself.

 

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I may use one or two of these in the finale of one of the acts for the Boneyard. Since it'd be pretty cool to see a Dragon or Nightmare show up in the heat of battle to turn the tide,

 

Chrono Tank - Infiltrate an Allied MCV and Tech Lab (as the Boneyard)

Mammoth Tank - Infiltrate a Soviet MCV and Tech Lab (as the Boneyard)

Dragon - Infiltrate an Epsilon MCV and Tech Lab (as the Boneyard)

Sinwalker - Infiltrate a Foehn MCV and Tech Lab (as the Boneyard)

Nightmare - Infiltrate a Boneyard MCV and Tech Lab (as the Boneyard)

 

The Chrono Tank is pioneered from allied ingenuity and the GRA's willingness to not let an idea die. It proves to be a swift pain in the ass to fight, since it can warp out of danger in the blink of an eye.

 

The Mammoth Tank is a monstrosity created from the ramparts of the Apocalypse Tank design and a Mammoth, it proves to be the Warceratops's big brother on the battlefield.

 

The Dragon is a fire breathing hell-razing hell-spawn created using Epsilon bio-engineering techniques to stitch together a dinosaur made from other dinosaurs. It lives up to the mythology of dragons, as it razes hell on the ground, and in the skies alike. Being excellent at disposing of infantry in seconds.

 

The Sinwalker is a bi-pedal walker pioneered from the logic of Foehn design, following the same principles employed by Foehn engineers, especially when designing the Cyclops and Megalodon. It serves as a robotic death unit that seeks nothing more than the demise of its enemies, as it also contains a fragment of the GRA's hatred towards the enemies of the Boneyard. Since it is rumored that Sinwalkers are merely just the avatars of the GRA's emotions on the battlefield. It brings a flamethrower and anti-air nanotechnology to the battlefield. The latter being a first for the Boneyard's forces.

 

The Nightmare was and always will be known as a horrifying accident, modeled after the Wendigo of native american mythology, it proves to live up to the title of being a hungering killing machine. In which after every kill, it regains a portion of its healthpoints, making it horrifying on the battlefield, and absolutely demoralizing to the morale of literally everyone. The GRA claims to never have made this beast, but despite these claims, it exists. Psionics and other non-conventional weapons do not harm it, as it contains an immune system that manages to fight off even a virus miraculously.

 

 

Yeah I got bored and decided to write these few knick-knacks into existence. A little bit of side-fanfiction for fanfiction.

 

For some reason the image didn't upload with the previous post.

 

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 I am both utterly terrified and extremely excited.

 

 

My brain is a literal endless void of randomly assorted ideas that would make a smashing RTS game. Just a little inspiration and away it goes!

 

Also give it up for page 2!


Edited by MusketMarine, 18 February 2020 - 08:48 AM.

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#22 MusketMarine

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Posted 19 February 2020 - 02:20 PM

I'm roughly half-way done with the Act One missions for the Boneyard, 27 pages so far, 6 missions fully described and written out in story perspective! This fanfiction has become a thing I regularly work on, as i've found myself taking every spare moment to add a thought or two to the story.

 

So I hope to have the Act One portion of the second iteration out before of the end of this month. Then i'll wait for 3.3.4 to drop the last few campaign missions before doing an entire Act Two, but I might do 6 Act Two missions before then, since i'm eager to introduce some of the hero units for the Boneyard's subfactions.

 

Edit: More cameo leaks here:

https://www.devianta...w=10:1582702227

 

- Robot Hound is a cut concept, replaced by Trackermine (Don't want to get controversial by having a suicide dog)

- Forgot to put Edmund on there

- Missing a lot of units listed on the voice-over spreadsheet I was doing, yeah I have a lot of Cameos to put together for this project.


Edited by MusketMarine, 26 February 2020 - 07:52 AM.

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#23 WritingFeline

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Posted 07 March 2020 - 03:49 PM

I'm roughly half-way done with the Act One missions for the Boneyard, 27 pages so far, 6 missions fully described and written out in story perspective! This fanfiction has become a thing I regularly work on, as i've found myself taking every spare moment to add a thought or two to the story.

 

So I hope to have the Act One portion of the second iteration out before of the end of this month. Then i'll wait for 3.3.4 to drop the last few campaign missions before doing an entire Act Two, but I might do 6 Act Two missions before then, since i'm eager to introduce some of the hero units for the Boneyard's subfactions.

 

Edit: More cameo leaks here:

https://www.devianta...w=10:1582702227

 

- Robot Hound is a cut concept, replaced by Trackermine (Don't want to get controversial by having a suicide dog)

- Forgot to put Edmund on there

- Missing a lot of units listed on the voice-over spreadsheet I was doing, yeah I have a lot of Cameos to put together for this project.

 All aboard the Warbus!

 

 Alright honestly, out of everything you have in that list I think the WARBUS is the most badass.

 

 Also, what does the Nashkhadan do?

 

 (It's good to be back.)



#24 MusketMarine

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Posted 08 March 2020 - 12:24 AM

 

I'm roughly half-way done with the Act One missions for the Boneyard, 27 pages so far, 6 missions fully described and written out in story perspective! This fanfiction has become a thing I regularly work on, as i've found myself taking every spare moment to add a thought or two to the story.

 

So I hope to have the Act One portion of the second iteration out before of the end of this month. Then i'll wait for 3.3.4 to drop the last few campaign missions before doing an entire Act Two, but I might do 6 Act Two missions before then, since i'm eager to introduce some of the hero units for the Boneyard's subfactions.

 

Edit: More cameo leaks here:

https://www.devianta...w=10:1582702227

 

- Robot Hound is a cut concept, replaced by Trackermine (Don't want to get controversial by having a suicide dog)

- Forgot to put Edmund on there

- Missing a lot of units listed on the voice-over spreadsheet I was doing, yeah I have a lot of Cameos to put together for this project.

 All aboard the Warbus!

 

 Alright honestly, out of everything you have in that list I think the WARBUS is the most badass.

 

 Also, what does the Nashkhadan do?

 

 (It's good to be back.)

 

 

Mashkhadan is the Chechen hero unit, who rides a horse into battle, much like a Cossack, and instead of using a sword or gun,

 

he throws grenades like an absolute madlad.

 

(Welcome back!)


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#25 MusketMarine

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Posted 13 March 2020 - 01:46 AM

We're 99% of the way there!

 

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I just... am not too happy with how I wrote certain characters into this, and might end up rewriting a few backstories. But other than that, it's almost finished. I just need to finish the Act One finale.


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Posted 13 March 2020 - 09:22 AM

We're 99% of the way there!

 

attachicon.gif POGCHAMP.png

 

I just... am not too happy with how I wrote certain characters into this, and might end up rewriting a few backstories. But other than that, it's almost finished. I just need to finish the Act One finale.

That's good! Remember to post it, I'm itching for some good reading material.

 

 (Cries in I haven't been able to finish half of Chapter 2.)







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