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#1 Spectre

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Posted 30 May 2008 - 09:18 PM

Name: Cody Lancer Jenkins
Position: Staff Sergeant
Age: 45
Experience: Jenkins, a staff sergeant which has excelled in his training courses, has been going from ship to ship for years trying to find a good battle and a good squad to attend to.

Edited by General Jenkins, 31 May 2008 - 03:11 AM.


#2 Vortigern

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Posted 30 May 2008 - 11:58 PM

I think you've slightly missed the point here.... Icarus is one ship. It has a crew of somewhere between two and twelve people, and operates independently. There is no Icarus battle fleet, no army, and nobody to lead to glory. Also, there is currently nothing to lead them to glory with. Furthermore, humanity is in a relatively peaceful age at the moment, there have been no major wars in hundreds of years, and never one that has been conducted on an interplanetary scale.

I would suggest a complete re-evaluation once I've put up a couple of other posts explaining quite what the story is here.

Edited by Vortigern, 31 May 2008 - 01:03 AM.

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#3 Spectre

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Posted 31 May 2008 - 03:00 AM

sorry, i'll re-evaluate it...

#4 Vortigern

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Posted 31 May 2008 - 12:53 PM

Closer, but that still wouldn't explain why he would join our crew. If he wants a decent squad to train he would probably have just joined a mercenary crew, not a gang of smugglers. Chances are that aboard Icarus he wouldn't even have a squad.

That would also not explain what he was doing in a criminal haven like Persephone. Might I suggest former military fallen on hard times, style of thing?
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#5 Spectre

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Posted 31 May 2008 - 04:24 PM

i don't really think i'm good for this type Rp, is it alright to resign?i'm very sorry, right now i have been caught up in alot lately and i think its about time i get to work redesigning my Rp before its final date due.

Sincerely, GJ

PS. if i have the time, i might consider joining, but right now i'm in to many Rp's as is, hope ya understand ;)

#6 Vortigern

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 12:23 AM

OK, not a problem. To be honest, I think you're right, your usual style of character wouldn't mesh at all well with the style of this RP. Good luck with getting all your Earthen Conflicts stuff sorted, which I assume is what you meant.
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Posted 03 June 2008 - 02:48 AM

yes yes that's what i meant, thank you for understanding, good luck with Icarus as well ole chap. ;)




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