Home by the Sea by Dauth is a strikingly good short story. At first, you don't know what to make of the Castle/Mansion. Dauth does a great job of letting the story flow. Each paragraph describes something different about the Castle/Mansion and brings to life new thoughts about the house and its residents. By the end of the story, you realize that the "main character" is not the robber, but the house itself. It is wonderfully written, and Dauth is a great addition to Revora's writing.
Home by the Sea, Dauth
Started by Beleg, Aug 17 2008 06:18 PM
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#1
Posted 17 August 2008 - 06:18 PM
92% of teens have moved onto rap. If you are part of the 8% that still listen to real music, copy and paste this into your signature
"Tell a joke and I will sigh and you will laugh and I will cry"
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"Tell a joke and I will sigh and you will laugh and I will cry"
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#2
Posted 17 August 2008 - 06:52 PM
Thanks for the analysis, did you try the link? It's a useful creepy song that I based the story on.
#3
Posted 17 August 2008 - 07:40 PM
I second that. Though there are a couple of little grammatical errors, but that's nothing really, a spot of proof-reading would clear that up. Congratulations on a good piece of writing, Dauth.
I'm listening to the song now, by the way.
I'm listening to the song now, by the way.
I hope I am a good enough writer that some day dwarves kill me and drink my blood for wisdom.
#4
Posted 22 August 2008 - 10:14 PM
OK, I have got to know where the errors are, every time I see Revora I remember you've mentioned them and it's driving me up the wall. So they would be helpful thanks.
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