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#1 Vortigern

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 11:30 PM

Let's see what you make of this, if anyone actually bothers to read it. The first post is just a history, I'm still working on the rest. I like to start my stuff with histories, for some reason. It's just my way. I'm still working on the rest, having only just come up with the idea. As a little insight, I was just contemplating deeply the future portrayed by H.G. Wells in The Time Machine, and one of my flatmates is playing Gears Of War. See if you can guess where this might end up heading.

By the way, there's another part of the history up next. Then it's story time.

An excerpt from The Hystoryes of Man, fourth edition, published in NC 12530, taken from the Menhattyn Lybrary.

In a time before space travel was possible, humanity was confined to the Earth, a dirty planet mostly covered by water and a natural, irremovable layer of smog and pollutants. This was the world upon which man was born, and the first in a long series of worlds to be emptied of life and destroyed by man. Earth it was that spawned the most arrogant of races, and Earth it was that ultimately saw to our downfall; cosmic harmony in action.

The New Calendar was formed when the former timetable of annuities, called the ‘Christian’ calendar, a relic from the Age of Religion, became so outdated as to no longer have a single subscriber for anything more than convenience. The Lord of War at the time, a man whose name has been consigned to the annals of oblivion, brought in a new calendar to make things simpler for his own people, making the old form obsolete virtually overnight. The New Calendar became the most common form of dating throughout the human realm, at the time expanding to contain several systems, some now lost, some still remaining somewhere in the void that was once full of sailors on the great empty ocean of space.

Mankind felt it ruled the land, the sea, the sky, and now space, the final frontier. The only thing standing between humanity and total universal domination was time. Time and an unseen foe, coming closer all the time. Possibly the saddest thing about this great enemy of man was that we had created it ourselves, effectively bringing about our own quintimation. Over two hundred billion lives were lost, approximately one-fifth of all human life in the galaxy, life which could so easily have been spared, had humanity been willing to trust itself. The impeccable system of checks and balances that kept power in the hands of those who would most abuse it fulfilled every aspect of itself, maintaining the egotistical plutocratic hyperarchy and its beloved status quo. With such a system in place, bloody revolution and war was almost inevitable. Ultimately, it was the few remaining inhabitants of the Earth that incited the first conflict, ridding themselves of the Terran Diarchy, executing the rulers and paving the way for the rest of the human empire to do the same. If the people of Earth had hoped for a galactic revolution, they would have been most pleased by the results of the next seventy years.

After the fall of Earth to anarchy, the closest colonies followed suit. Mars, Europa, Ceres, Titania and the entire Sirius system all removed their ruling classes, banishing or executing them. Other systems fell to blood-soaked anarchy, killing millions in the process. The great swathe of destruction was not to hit humanity until sixteen years after the end of the last major revolt. Without government, trade fell off, piracy rose dramatically, criminals thrived in worlds without policing, farmers lost their crops and disaster after disaster struck the unregulated planets and satellites. The eventual lack of food, clean water and deterrents against criminality ended the lives of far more than the revolutions could have accounted for, even at the worst estimates. The decline in trade and output from the farming worlds gave rise to mass hunger throughout the human territories, leading many to riot in their search for the simplest of fodder. More and more people were killed, more and more governments were toppled, eventually bringing about the destruction of the fibres of empire; humankind was left far apart on separate worlds, unable to travel between them but for a few hardy vessels and pirates. Desperate citizens fled aboard the illegal craft, seeking out their loved ones, often only to find that they were already dead.


I hope I am a good enough writer that some day dwarves kill me and drink my blood for wisdom.

#2 Vortigern

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 12:23 AM

And here's the rest of the history.

Excerpt from The Ryse and Fall of Humanyty, by Meryn Khan, second edition, published in NC 12961, courtesy of the Mænhettyn Lybrary – thanks to Änu Pylynn for the translation.

Four hundred years ago none would have suspected that humanity would soon be forced to move underground, forcibly ejected by factors outside their control. Of course, life may be different for the many humans still thought to survive on other worlds, but myth and legend have no place in a factual account of history. The honest truth is that for several hundred years humanity ruled Ärys unchallenged. Whether Ärys is or is not our true homeworld is a matter for another debate, but logic and common sense would lead us to believe that this is the world upon which humanity came to fruition, discovered life and breath, rose out of the primordial muck that engulfed this once-blessed world and learnt to pay homage to the gods. However, it is most certainly upon the world of Ärys that our troubles will continue.

Underground now, we hide from the problem that has brought about our misfortune, only emerging as and when we need to. This is the life we have come to know, the life we are born to, the life we will take to our light-blasted graves, our bodies left to decompose where they lie, or to be pulled away by the Scorpions; no griever has ever remained above ground long enough to find out.

The Scorpions: the sole reason that the humans of Ärys are confined to a subterranean prison. We have never even made contact with them, save to witness our friends being torn away from us and ripped to pieces, or worse. The poison in the tip of a Scorpion’s tail will make a human bloat, turn any one of a variety of deathly hues dependent on matters we have been unable to discern, and eventually die in terrible agony. As far as we have been able to tell, there is no antidote. It seems ironic to me that the Scorpions are named after a minor species of insect known to humanity long before the invaders, dangerous only if their poison was distilled again and again into a pure form then administered in large doses. The Scorpions of today are more fearsome by far.

For the past three hundred years, humanity has subsisted on the little food that can be cultivated away from the blessings of the sun. Contemporary artwork tells us that, before moving below the surface, human skin was of a much darker tint and the body structure was significantly larger, sometimes as colossal as six feet tall, though they were thinner, leaner, less muscular than the new breed. It seems that we have been shrinking in height and gaining in breadth since the day we moved underground. A logical procession would therefore have us eventually becoming worm-like creatures, long and low, well-designed for tunnelling through the dank darkness of our hypogeal realm, but wholly insufficient for the day we move back above ground. To further extend this logic, should humanity ever wish to return to the light, sooner is better than later. The longer we leave it, the harder the task will become, and the stronger the Scorpions will become.

The end of this book was never written. The most popular suggestion is the death of the author, as this was being worked upon around the time of humanity’s attempted return to the surface of Ärys.


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#3 Rafv Nin IV

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 01:13 AM

That's pretty intense. I want to see more of it :p

Feel free to delete this post for a sense of continuity between your posts.

Edited by Ravnin IV, 26 November 2008 - 01:14 AM.

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Posted 12 December 2008 - 03:10 PM

Next instalment, and the beginning of the story proper.

Gala D’Ynyesta rose to his feet, standing a full three inches above anyone else in the crowd. The gathering was angry, despairing, frustrated, demented. There was barely any humanity left in the people of Ärys, subdued and conquered as they were. There were those among the humans that still fought, that still cared for their planet, that still longed to see the sun, that died at the hands of the Scorpions, though ‘hands’ may be a somewhat misleading word. Talons, maybe.

“Permission to speak, Lord Cavalys?” requested Gala, making his voice echo around the subterranean chamber.

“Only if it is something worth hearing,” replied the Lord. Certain formalities were no longer recognised, though some clung to outmoded traditions.

“Death and decay clings to our realm, sir,” began Gala. He had rehearsed this little speech and had felt a strong beginning was vital to the overall acceptance of his point. “We hide away from the light and from the enemy. We shy away from confrontation like the insect life that now surrounds us. We are no better than parasites on this once-great planet, minor creatures, a slave race, held in chains by our own unwillingness to venture forth onto the surface once more, to see the light of the Sun, to fight the Scorpions on our terms. They have come to our world and they have destroyed us. They had no right to be here, and we had no obligation to let them stay. I know I am not alone in longing for the days when humankind walked on the grass, above ground, beneath the sky, under the canopic shade of our arboreal realm. We should not hide away from what we are, my people! What sins must our ancestors have committed to confine us to this paltry existence? What terrible thing was done to leave such a race as ours hidden away, never daring to reach for the heights we once recognised?” Gala paused, surveying his wide-eyed audience. He very much doubted they had expected this. Lord Cavalys took advantage of the momentary silence to intervene.

“We do not know what was done to condemn our people, if anything,” he began.

“Then why do we remain here?” demanded Gala, vigour emanating from his every pore.

“Because we have no choice!” shouted someone from the middle of the crowd.

“Because we have no choice,” repeated Lord Cavalys. “We cannot fight the Scorpions. A few drops of their poison will kill us and we have no weapons that can hurt them.”

“Then we make new weapons!” insisted Gala, a righteous fury rising in his yellow eyes. “We are an ingenuous people. We have dug these caverns from the bedrock of our planet. We have evolved beyond the need for light to see by, beyond the species humanity once was, and now it is time for us to reclaim what is rightfully ours.” A few members of the gathering began to murmur, and Gala knew his argument was being felt. “What was once the kingdom of man will be again if we but put our minds to it!” he fair shouted. “Humanity has crawled, invisible, for too long. We should not be running from our problems. We should be confronting them, and defeating them! What would our mighty ancestors think if they could see us now? Would they be proud of what we have become? Would they accept us as their own? Would they be happy for us, living in darkness, afraid to venture into the light?” A cheer rose up around the chamber; Gala permitted himself a quiet smile. “It is time we fought, my friends! It is time humankind returned to the world from whence we came!”

“You speak out of turn, D’Ynyesta,” said Lord Cavalys, quietly, but firmly. Every person present in the chamber heard him clearly. “We cannot fight the Scorpions. Not as we are. They outnumber us-”

“How do we know that?” asked Gala, pride and precocious fury still very evident. “We have never been above ground long enough to find out! For all we know we may outnumber them a hundred to one.”

“Unlikely. If the Scorpions saw off our ancestors, they must have been powerful indeed.”

“That was hundreds of years ago. We do not know if they even remained in force. They might have been invaders come not colonise but to destroy, and left a small garrison behind once humanity fled the surface. We have never found out.”

“And we have no need to. We live underground, we have done for centuries and we will do for centuries more, maybe even millennia.”

“And you would settle for that?” wondered Gala. “What we have here is life, but not as life should be. I for one am unwilling to accept that this subterranean existence is all we may have. Humans should not dwell beneath the ground. We should be under the light, proud and free, not bound to this unconditional surrender to a form of life we have never even contacted. This is not the life humanity was born to, and it is not the life humanity deserves.” Gala looked directly at Lord Cavalys, ignoring the crowd for a moment. Silence fell across the colossal chamber. “All I ask is that you put it to a vote. Let your people decide what path we should take.”

“What makes you think I would do that?” asked the Lord of War. “These are my people, and I have no desire to lead them to certain death.”

“Then how about you lead them to a better life. The life they deserve. The life we all deserve!” Another mighty cheer rose up around the chamber, echoing from the stone walls. “Set your people free!” shouted Gala, looking around and lifting his arms, in harmony with the swell of noise and emotion. “You, Lord Cavalys, could go down in history as the man who led the people of Ärys back to the surface. Think about it.”

“Or I could go down as the man who led his people to utter destruction.”

“If we are all killed then who will remember any of us? We have nothing to lose, Lord Cavalys.”

“Nothing but our lives.”

“If you call this life. I long for the feel of the sun on my skin, for the fresh touch of the wind in my hair, for the smell of grass and trees and plants, and to eat something more appealing than bloody potatoes!” A laugh rippled around the cavern. “You are the man to lead us to victory, Lord of War. Why do you refuse to accept the responsibilities of the title you bear?”

“Speak with me in private, D’Ynyesta,” ordered Cavalys, turning and striding from the podium. Gala followed, tumultuous applause carrying him from the room, lifting his spirit and letting him know he walked the true path.


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#5 Vortigern

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Posted 12 December 2008 - 03:12 PM

Lord Cavalys’ personal chamber was not grand by traditional standards: sparse, if anything. The furnishings were carved from the bare rock, just as they were in the quarters of every other human living under Ärys. The only luxury on show was a wooden table, smooth and polished, perfectly flat, reflecting the gentle glow of the lichen that afforded humanity sight so far away from the sun. Cavalys took a seat on the rock shelf that served as a couch. He indicated that Gala should do the same.

“You know it is pure folly to lead our people back above ground. The Scorpions will kill us all.”

“Not if we fight them.”

“And how do you propose we do that?”

“The way we know best. Hide and run. We hit them quickly and retreat, back underground if needs be. But we will slowly wear them down and emerge when there are few enough of them to be easily defeated.”

“How long do you think this will take?”

“That depends on how easy they are to kill and how many of them there are. I really could not offer you an estimate right now.”

“I understand. Given current weapons available to us, it should take approximately the rest of time to kill any single one of them.”

“Which is why we make ourselves some weapons. We must have some inkling of how to create tools of death.”

“Do you?”

“I have some ideas.”

“Would you like to share them with me?”

“Do you know what tools were used to carve this seat?” Cavalys shook his head, uncomprehending. “Anything strong enough to cut through solid rock must be strong enough to cut through a Scorpion.”

“First we would have to get close enough.”

“Or turn it into some form of projectile.” Cavalys stroked his fuzzy chin, product of a lifetime’s evasion of shaving.

“That could work,” he mused. “You might well be on to something here. The only problem is that we have no idea where to find these tools, or if they even still exist.”

“That is where I come in. I will lead an expedition down into the deepest caverns, where our ancestors first dwelt when they left the surface. If they have left us any clues, we will find them there.” Cavalys was silent for a few minutes, while Gala managed not to disturb his thought process. Eventually Cavalys came to a conclusion.

“Then go with my blessing. Take whoever and whatever you need.” Gala rose. “And be careful. Who knows what lurks down there now.” Gala nodded and turned to leave. As he reached the door he turned his head and looked the Lord of War straight in the eye.

“Our time is coming once again, Lord Cavalys. And humankind shall not be found wanting.”


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#6 Copaman

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Posted 13 December 2008 - 06:34 AM

Very nice. I'm looking forward to reading more :)

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