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#1 Vithar-133

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 09:00 PM

Name: Vithar Akluun, Isamukatsu

Age: 317

Gender: Male

Race: Half Elf, half Furya. He appears to be a Furya, but also retains much of his elven racial qualities, including longevity. He doesn't suffer the life-shortening effects that most Furya feel, but he is unable to use the powerful magic that Furya have. In general his magical abilities can contend with most of the mages from either race, but he tires quickly when he has to draw on stronger power.

Weapons: Mainly wields Nyrsavai, a katana made of a gold glowing metal and a relatively plain hilt of wood and leather, normally worn across his back. He also carries a longbow and a brace of knives of similar make to Nyrsavai. Primarily, he uses healing magic, but will resort to battle magic if the need arises. He rarely uses Elfsong, but when he does, it is often to heal or hide himself from enemies.


Class: Ronin/ Wandering warrior.

History: Vithar was known for his blade style, unique to him among any Elfkin. After he reached the age of 250, he chose to leave Elmharrow to wander the plains, so that he might better himself. He befriended few people, and rarely stayed in one place for more than a fortnight. He participated in a few human battles, although he usually left before the battle's conclusion. After two decades of travel, he returned to Elmharrow and fell in love with ah elf-maid. Vithar, suffering wanderlust, soon took leave of Elmharrow, promising to return every so many months. Before he left, his lover gave him a few gifts, namely a simple silver ring with a garnet set in it, a silver necklace with a small pendant of silver and gold, and a blessed coin. for the next decade, he spent time refining his blade style, blend metal and mind.

Alightnment: Generally neutral, although he'll fight for good before he will for evil.


How's this?


This should be about as close to final as I can get it.

Edited by Vithar Megilaglar, 30 November 2008 - 02:57 AM.

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#2 Copaman

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 09:48 PM

Looks good to me but I can't really approve it for ya... that's up to Vort...

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#3 Rafv Nin IV

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 09:57 PM

You might want to refine "Elven." Is your character a Drow, Wood-elf, or Deathknelf?

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:38 AM

The character is fine, but to be honest I'm not quite so keen on having another elf around. We've already got a Drow, a Deathknelf and two wood elves. Might I suggest switching to a different race? If you don't want to, that's still fine, it's really just me.
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#5 Vithar-133

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:43 AM

I see. I'll make a little modification.

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#6 Vortigern

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:59 AM

OK, we're all set. You are approved.
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