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[Luchiaros]

Faction Name: Alsarda Union
Faction Technology: Plasma Weaponry Pulse Lasers, Photon Weaponry, Energy Shields, Shell Weapons, Warp Travel, Hover Pads, Nuclear Power and things they acquire from other factions
Military Strength: Ship cloaking devices, infantry personal camouflage, large production yards and most males are warriors.
Military Weakness: WIP
Government Style: Alsarda is led by a Council that has complete control, however all the councilors have to decided what to do as one, not even the High Councilor can make laws with out a majority of the council agreeing with him.
Social Flaws:
1) The Union is a military based faction, making them less friendly to other factions.
2) Those that succeed in combat are ranked higher then others, those that don't are not treated as fairly.
Redeeming Features:
1)The tales of great deeds are carved into walls, this creates things for youngsters to look upon as they grow up.
2) The Union is open to all trade routes.
Main Characters: High Councilor Valde Rector, Councilor Altus Rector, Councilor Optimus Unus, Fleet Master Optimus Proeliator and Field Master Validus Trucido.
Other Information: The Union has only one race and that is the Bellatorians (Bellator is singular), and all of their names are Latin and can be translated into English, usually it means some thing that has to do with their rank.

Character Name: High Councilor Valde Rector
Character Age: 431, Bellatorians usually live to about 500
Character Gender: Male
Character Profession: High Councilor
Character Appearance: Basically This but gold instead of white
Character History: WIP

Character Name: Councilor Altus Rector
Character Age: 427
Character Gender: Male
Character Profession: Councilor
Character Appearance: Basically This
Character History: WIP

Character Name: Councilor Optimus Unus
Character Age: 398
Character Gender: Male
Character Profession: Councilor
Character Appearance: Basically This
Character History: WIP

Character Name: Grand Admiral Optimus Proeliator
Character Age: 374
Character Gender: Male
Character Profession: Fleet Leader
Character Appearance: Basically This
Character History: WIP

Character Name: High Commander Validus Trucido
Character Age: 251
Character Gender: Male
Character Profession: Field Leader
Character Appearance: Basically This
Character History: WIP

List of Ships in the Union Defense Force (UDF):

Hellfire class Starcruiser
Tartarus class Starcruiser
Ragnarok class Battleship
Agonizer class Battleship
Cronus class Battleship
Athena class Assault Cruiser
Vengeance class Assault Cruiser
Specter Class Assault Cruiser
Orion class Assault Frigate
Apollo class Assault Frigate
Cerberus class Assault Frigate
Odin class Frigate
Merciless class Frigate
Shadow class Frigate
Ghost class Frigate
Artemis class Cruiser
Aphrodite class Cruiser
Wraith class Cruiser
Banshee class Cruiser
Shade class Cruiser
Cyclops class Destroyer
Prometheus class Destroyer
Epimethius class Destroyer
Hephaestus class Destroyer

List of UDF Ranks:

Fleet:

Grand Admiral
High Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Rear Admiral
Ship Commander
Ship Master
Fleet Escelon
Rear Escelon
Fleet Devor
Rear Devor
Fleet Trian
Rear Trian

Ground:

High Commander
Field Commander
High Officer
Field Officer
Field Master
Forward Benshi
Field Benshi
Forward Tacoth
Field Tacoth
Forward Entria
Field Entria
Casor Entria
Rear Entria

List of Council Ranks:

High Councilor
Councilor
Councilman
Council Adviser
Council Recorder

List of Military Divisions:

Union Defense Fleet~
-1st Sector Fleet
-2nd Sector Fleet
-3rd Sector Fleet
-4th Sector Fleet
-5th Sector Fleet
-6th Sector Fleet
-7th Sector Fleet
-8th Sector Fleet
Union Defense Force~
-1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th, 9th and 10th Infantry Units
-11th, 12, 13th, 14th, 15th and 16th Mechanized Units
-17th, 18th, 19th and 20th Air Units
-21st and 22nd Spec Forces Units
-23rd, 24th, 25th, 26th, 27th, 28th, 29th and 30th Defense Units
-31st, 32nd, 33rd and 34th Artillery Units
Council Guard~
-1st and 2nd High Honor Guard Units
-3rd and 4th Honor Guard Units
Sector Fleet~
-2 Council Fleets
-5 Assault Fleets
-4 Defense Fleets
-2 Artillery Fleets

Map of the Union:

[Vortigern]

Durandel put together a complete rip-off of Halo for the original Worlds of War and got some serious verbal abuse. Might I recommend at least a few changes here and there?

[some_weirdGuy]

You can take traits and be influenced by them, but don't just straight out rip off your faction from somewhere else. And just changing the name does not count as changing it. Just try to be original, if you want take the concept of the halo faction and then build onto it and modify it how you want, to make it your own.

Its your chance to be creative, you can change them however you want(within reason), so if theres anything about them you didn't like you can modify it, both making you happy, and making it more original as well.


For example in the original i created Kronos, a computer AI faction, and i took influence from the replicators from Stargate, and from Cabal from Command and Conquer. But i then edited and changed things and made it more my own. And while similar to those i took influence from, he was still somewhat my own (I must admit though i could have probably gone even further and been even more original then i was, but i didn't just straight rip off my faction from somewhere else)

[Luchiaros]

Okay, I can change it, but am I allowed to use the Elite appearance for my race?

[Fire Ze Missiles!]

I think the best way to do it is to describe it in words and not use a link to a picture, then it's less obvious

[Luchiaros]

Hrmm, describing them isn't going to be easy but I can give it a try

[Casojin]

Nice to have a new member.

[Luchiaros]

I have now changed it so it's not a complete rip-off of halo

[Casojin]

Could you explain more about ability to steal shields from other ships?
It drains the shield?

[Luchiaros]

Basically it takes the targets shields and transfers it to the ship that fired the transfer beam, it's not really important to me so I can remove it easily.

[Casojin]

Hmm....don't you feel that it's too overpower?

[Luchiaros]

It probably is, I have removed it from the list