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#1 Elegost

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 11:48 AM

Hi there , I would like to present my draws , more precisely this one I've did the last year , it's Ugluk (made without model during the lesson of Arts :

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#2 Elegost

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 08:41 PM

No comments ? no feedback?

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 09:09 PM

Very neat, especially without a model :thumbsupsmiley: Add some more details and shadows though, and it'll be even better :p
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Posted 09 September 2010 - 01:21 AM

Contrast! Press down really hard in darker areas, and very light in lighter areas. Less of the all grey tone. If you look at it closely you notice shadows, but look at the thumbnail for example, it looks like a solid shade of grey. Needs more value.

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#5 Elegost

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 07:40 AM

Tha,ks ! I'm going to improve it , I'm focused on it by the advices of Kwen and Allathar . Thanks for you feedback , guys :thumbsupsmiley:




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