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[Spectre]

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The UWSC Alliance

the alliance was founded on the home planet "Onyx" and has colonized throught the galaxy for years,it is mostly called the UWSC though it is called origanally the UWSC Alliance,it is the only race known to make the super-soldier project ARCHER-I,and is known for its powerful army and incredible colonies,though they are a peaceful race,they can become paranoid.they are also known for there military tech as having the first functional AI's.in conclusion,messing with theses men will only result in death.

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History

in the soviet-american war of 2008,the majority of the population from Earth fled from Earth to escape the war that almost killed the soviets and americans,in 2010 they found Reach and claimed it,the planet had vast resources and almost replicated Earth,they began construction,in 2500 they colonizied the first planets klan-hun II and Onyx,in late 2060 they designed the ARCHER-III project that made foot-soldiers look like civilians,in 2547 they found an outragious war which they were forced into when there 21st planet Paradise was destroyed in the war.

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((i well put more in later))

Edited by General Jenkins, 02 January 2008 - 12:31 AM.

[Elerium]

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HALO

[Fire Ze Missiles!]

Yeah. This is quite a blatant rip.
If I could direct your attention to this thread:
http://forums.revora...showtopic=54972
Well the bottom half of it anyway.

[Byakuya Kuchiki]

during the soviet-american war most refugee's from america (which were most of the population)along with other countrys escaped to reach.they invented the spartan III project ,they have 30 colonies and growing becuase of the hyperspace technology,all thier army focus on metal products and oil along with other minerals,they don't use bio-chemistry for attacks.there most producive world is Harvest that provide most of thier food.

Quite frankly I should have asked for more. Seeing as to how this is ripped directly from the Halo series, including all the planets and tech that you've said so far, I'm unapproving it until you update it with more original descriptions, names, and technology.

special species:they are also allied with the elites and grunts from halo.they have the halo sentinels as there workers that build there homes along with other things,they carry guns for safety(the ones that are mounted in there bodies).

Also don't remember approving this tidbit.

[Spectre]

ok.ok i admit that i mainly just ripped it from halo,but why does it matter?i love halo as seen,so why can't i?it's not that fun when you have to obey rules that limit you to your possablities (no offense gandalf)and don't try sending millions of complaints saing im an "asshole" because i won't respond.
im still gonna leave reach on it.but i'll work on it so it's not such a shit-rip-off.

[Byakuya Kuchiki]

I still think it's to halo-like. Halo is it's own universe, and this is ours. Halo, while it takes place in the Milky way, it has things that this RP will never have, the Halos included. I just don't think it possible to bring that universe into ours. Granted, the same technology would work, but the worlds, systems, everything else about halo (Including the covanent) is halo, and not suited for WoW. The technology, ships, weapons and things that are part of the UNSC would be fine, and I could see that through trades you could have some higher tech such as plasma and stuff, but the Covanent can't be part of this faction, I have other plans that require their use as an NPC faction, no I will not discuss these plans, and nor do I wish to be asked what these plans are.

Reach, Onyx, and all other planets located in the Halo subsidiaries are part of the Halo universe, so like I said, change the names, the history, and the tech names, and I'd be fine with it.

[Spectre]

can i at least keep Onyx as a planet,all the rest will be realistic.its a neat name for a planet,just think its different from the real reach on halo,and i bet your gonna say that the spartan things need to be removed,i'll work on it later,and about the halo thing,no one told me this would be like a real life world war thing.

Edited by General Jenkins, 30 December 2007 - 06:42 PM.

[Byakuya Kuchiki]

Not world war. Space wars. The Halo universe simply doesn't fit into this. Other galaxies WILL be coming into this, it's not going to be just the Milky Way. And yes, the spartans need to be changed. Onyx (or the subsequent term Onix or even Onex, would preferably be better) but is completely fine. We just don't want the entire Halo thing in this RP. Thanks for understanding.

[Spectre]

ya i understand,it does make sense to not copy off other things.

ok Gandalf can you scrap this idea?i'm thinking of a race right now.........i'm gonna have pretty much scattered tech......and will you allow Anthropomorphism Foxes?(or Kitsunes for that matter?)

Edited by General Jenkins, 27 February 2008 - 01:51 AM.