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#1 Rafv Nin IV

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Posted 26 March 2009 - 06:34 AM

Faction Name: Rakbi Conglomerate

Alliance: (I'm not quite sure which one they should be in. I'm thinking the Coalition or Federation, because they aren't antagonistic enough to like the Dominion)

Faction Technology/Military Strength: The Rakbi are a water-based race, and their strength is naval. On, above, and under the oceans, they are unsurpassed. What started as mere meteorological prowess has developed into full-scale weather control, although the weather is unmolested on the Rakbi homeworld. This strength is so advanced that tertiary battles against the Rakbi are guaranteed to have the Rakbi utilizing their meteorological talents. During planetside battles, the Rakbi will manipulate the weather to their advantage. This leads, of course, to their naval power, because they can swamp and overturn enemy ships, send storms into their plane squadrons, and harness the forces of enormous waterspouts and typhoons. As the Rakbi are amphibious, sailors willingly abandon their ships when they begin to sink, taking to the water and continuing the fight.
The Rakbi are experts of balistics and have discovered an (atomically) stable isotope of Francium, unknown to the rest of the Galaxy. When combined with water, a single-displacement reaction occurs with H2O and members of the Lithium family--the more massive the element, the greater the reaction. This is why a gram of Lithium dropped into a cup of water merely boils and a gram of Cesium dropped into a cup of water can blow up a room. The reaction with Francium is even greater. It is the greatest chemical reaction known in the Galaxy. The single-displacement reaction bonds Francium with Oxygen, releasing hydrogen gas and immense heat. The heat, however, is so intense that it disentegrates the Fr2O into Francium ions and Oxygen. The heat then lights the hydrogen in the presence of the oxygen, creating a second reaction even greater than the first. Because the heat from the first reaction splits the Fr2O and releases O2, the ingredients for the second reaction are the products of the first. This means that even though the second reaction is a combustion reaction, it can still take place in the vacuum of space. The Rakbi use Francium almost exclusively in spacial warfare--they employ the use of projectile weapons of all sorts, from incredibly destructive Francium-water missiles to Francium-water bullets.
The masad are the elite land troops of the Rakbi. They utilize Francium-water weapons and microwave-based sidearms called Incinerators, as well as sidearms and blades. The last resort of a pinned Rakbi is his own fangs and claws.
Large machines nicknamed "Tide Churners" harness the inherent power of the Oceans and provide the Rakbi with all the electricity and other power types they require.

Military Weakness: The Rakbi have only been cruising the stars for a thousand years, and their warp-drives are basic. They are awkward on land and prefer to fight in water, and bombard land from ocean and space. Only the masad can hold their own on land.

Government Style: Each Rakbi Clan is its own independent nation, and many have different styles of government. See below.

Summary of Rakbi Clans:
Nin--Libertarian and capitalist in the extreme, the Nin have great variance in individuals talent and wealth. They are closely allied with the Kar/Tan. Aristocracy.
Kar/Tan--Capitalist, but regulated. Aristocracy. The Kar/Tan have a near-monopoly on the Francium production market. Allied with the Nin.
Lab/Var--Socialist and oppressive in the extreme; the foil of the Nin. The Lab/Var have a high population, but the quality of their lives is lower than the other Clans. Dictatorship. On friendly relations with all except the Nin and Kar/Tan.
Margrande--Called the "Roamers" by the other Clans, the Margrande have not industrialized or settled. They own vast tracks of ocean, and live the way their ancestors did long ago--in small, nomadic groups, the apex predator of the ocean.
Vore--The pioneers of space. First off their homeworld and first to colonize another planet, the Vore continue to have the fastest, most powerful vessels. The Vore are ruled by a corporation, much like the Gles. Vore can buy stock in the corporation; the more stock they have, the more their vote counts, and the more of the gross income of the Vore they recieve. Allied closely with the Gles.
Gles--The pioneers of weather, the Gles have the most sophisticated weather-controlling devices. They are ruled by the megacorporation WorldWideWeather, or WWW. Allied with the Vore.
Other clans too insignificant to warrant an explanation here.

Social Flaws: The Rakbi, as demonstrated above, are far from united. Each Clan signs treaties individually, and Rakbi politics is messy and assassination-prone. This slows reaction in times of war against a common enemy, as no Clan wants to suffer the consequences of entering a war unaided. The Rakbi also waste a great deal of their resources in inter-Clan stife.

Redeeming Features: Each Clan has it's own redeeming features. Oh, and they're amphibious, which makes up for all that bad stuff. :umad:

Main Characters (Rakbi are named by their first name, and then their Clan name): Shandrava Vore, Admiral of the Star Orca Pod, best of the Vore fleet; Rafv Nin, leader of the Nin masad; Gesh Nin, most powerful aristocrat in the Nin Clan; Darfaran Gles, a prominent meteorologist; Aszad Kar/Tan, Admiral of the Grouper Gang, pride of the Kar/Tan navy.

Other Information: The Rakbi are short, standing only five feet tall on average. They have two long legs and two long arms, culminating in massive webbed hands and feet (the average Rakbi hand spans eighteen inches). Gills are located on either side of their long, retractable necks and along their short torsos, and lungs inside their torsos. The Rakbi have claws and fangs, remnants of their days as a forever swimming predator of the seas. A Rakbi's jaw power far outmatches that of most sentient races, and their mouths are fit for tearing and ripping flesh. Three sets of eyelids cover their sunk in eyes; one opaque for resting, one polarized for use on land and in shallow water, and one transparent for low-visibility situations. Rakbi have one nostril below their mouth, but have no sense of smell. However, they can taste the air or water and recieve much the same sensation as other races have for smell.

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Edited by Durandel, 25 April 2009 - 10:11 PM.

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Posted 26 March 2009 - 08:55 AM

A few things: first off the bat, the second-from-bottom element in the Lithium family is spelt 'caesium'. It is named after the Caesar family, therefore it has an a in it. Screw you, American English. Second, the Lab/Var and the other one with a slash in the name: they actually have a split name? That's on purpose? Third: heh, you named one of the characters after yourself, or vice versa? I totally didn't realise that when I saw the Nin tribe at first.

Other than that, I like your faction. Were it not horrendously non-canon, I would ask for an alliance, but seeing as we probably want you dead for no particular reason, that's not going to work. :umad:
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 04:09 PM

I'd say that, by right of rescuing the British from two World Wars, we Americans ought to have the right to our own spelling of Cesium. :umad:

The Lab/Var and Kar/Tan are the results of Clans merging, long ago. About six hundred Earth-years before the Rakbi colonized other planets, they waged a massive, century-long war. Most of the Clans that lived then perished in the war. Some few of them, becoming to small to hold their own, arranged unifying marriages and treaties with their closest allies. So, basically, the Kar/Tan are just the remnants of the Kar and Tan clans, combined.

And I named myself after the character. Rafv Nin (the crazy-awesome warrior) has been around in my imagination for a while. :p

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Posted 26 March 2009 - 05:18 PM

Well, all the stuff about the Rakbi is fair enough. Well thought out, young Ratman. However, I must disagree with you on your first point. The Americans did not save the British in eaither World War. Really think about it. In WWI the American troops only arrived in April 1918, six months before the war was won. Their arrival sped up the process, but Britain had already won the hardest part of the war on our own. All the Americans did was help tidy up. And then in WW2 you expended most of your energy against Japan, with whom we never even came into contact because they're all the way on the other side of the world from us. That was essentially a separate but simultaneous war, and then we did the majority of the work at D-Day, and it was British troops that took Berlin, or at least Commonwealth troops. On a side note, I just found out in the course of my tiny bit of background brushing up I just did that only one American veteran of WWI remains alive today, 91 years after the war ended. Good for him, I say.
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 06:39 PM

Well, all the stuff about the Rakbi is fair enough. Well thought out, young Ratman. However, I must disagree with you on your first point. The Americans did not save the British in eaither World War. Really think about it. In WWI the American troops only arrived in April 1918, six months before the war was won. Their arrival sped up the process, but Britain had already won the hardest part of the war on our own. All the Americans did was help tidy up. And then in WW2 you expended most of your energy against Japan, with whom we never even came into contact because they're all the way on the other side of the world from us. That was essentially a separate but simultaneous war, and then we did the majority of the work at D-Day, and it was British troops that took Berlin, or at least Commonwealth troops. On a side note, I just found out in the course of my tiny bit of background brushing up I just did that only one American veteran of WWI remains alive today, 91 years after the war ended. Good for him, I say.


Vort in 1916 and 1917 the soldiers on both sides of the conflict were in open rebellion against their respective countries and it is only after the U.S. joined in that the war started up again and it became a victory for England and her allies.

And during WWII America focused most of our attention on the European Front then after the Allies won there we refocused on the Pacific Front. And saying that the British weren't involved in the war in the Pacific is just not true. The Bristish were involved in fighting in what was Indo-china and had to keep the Japanese away from India, not to mention that Austrialia which was a British Commonwealth country was fighting to keep the Japanese off their soil. On another note the British didn't do most of the work on D-Day. The U.S. had 2 to 3 times the number of troops present and most of the material used was brought in by the U.S. due to the german blockade of the British Isles. And it was the Red Army that took Berlin not the British, thats why it was in East Germany after the war.

And can we please get back on topic, you know Worlds of War.

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Posted 27 March 2009 - 05:54 AM

Ontopic stuff first:
As long as this element thing isn't overpowered (basically, as long as you are sensible) then its fine. The one thing i do have to say is:

alien water would not be the same as water on your planet. Just like the air would not be the same. For RP-ability we will probably ignore this, but im just wanting to point it out

seems pretty good, accepted i say.

Other than that, I like your faction. Were it not horrendously non-canon, I would ask for an alliance, but seeing as we probably want you dead for no particular reason, that's not going to work.


Besides your own factions aggressiveness, it might not be as unlikely as you would think :)

Collective is allied with Dominion. And seen as Vorts guys are dominion, if you pick collective you will be his ally, so yeah.

But i think you should go Alliance, it was originally named after your faction, and that was for a reason. The 'style' i had thought up for them was sorta similar to your own faction. Of coarse that has changed now, but i still think they should be part of the Alliance.

Screw you, American English

Here here :evgr:

I'd say that, by right of rescuing the British from two World Wars, we Americans ought to have the right to our own spelling of Cesium. happy.gif

America is sorta childish that way. They fight for their independence from England and then feel, 'just so we are different' they need to change things spelling and drive on the oposite side of the road and all that kind of silliness.

See, Australia is smart, because instead of having a war to get our freedom, we just cruise along really doing our own thing despite technically still being part of the commonwealth. It really makes no difference to us, nothing really changes either way. We could become a republic right now if we wanted to... but we just dont care.

And Americans only join the wars when it suits them. Other then that they seem to hold back, We come running to their aid straight away, but when we need help it usually takes the americans a while to get up and do anything, and thats usually only after it effects them personally
(for example, pearl harbor gets attacked)

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Posted 27 March 2009 - 06:11 AM

Can we please get back to WoW.

Edited by Drakconus, 27 March 2009 - 06:18 AM.


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Posted 27 March 2009 - 06:57 AM

Rakbi physiology reminds me of loxatl from Gaunt's Ghosts with exception of appearance.
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