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[some_weirdGuy]

Seems pretty good... but is it done? Seems like you are still working on it.

[Drakconus]

I wasn't sure how detailed you wanted it, I have more but I wasn't sure how to put it into the form.

could you tell me what I should elaborate on?

Edited by Drakconus, 23 March 2009 - 08:24 AM.

[some_weirdGuy]

first off, new rule:

i have decided. No humans. Just make these people humanoid aliens if you have to, although it would be nice to see something more creative then that.

also, elaboration required on:
path of the stars? (???)
and your characters for your faction. You need some even if you aren't wanting to go in the 'character-not-of-your-race' RP bit

[Drakconus]

No humans, thats going to be hard seeing how the Astrum are decended from humans and all the info I have on them is based off humans (I have 6-10 word doc pages on them, I've been working on them for 4+ years). I guess that I could create a race that is like humans but doesn't have a relation to humans but that would take some more time to create a new back story.

The Path of Stars is like their religion, I have only started work on it recently so I don't have alot of info on it.

I can come up with more charaters but not using a race based of humans with make that difficult.

Edited by Drakconus, 24 March 2009 - 08:22 PM.

[Vortigern]

OK then, shall we settle for Mike and Drakconus can have human factions, but nobody else who joins can? That seems fair to me, and doesn't put to waste all the time and effort they've both put into their factions already.

[Drakconus]

go to next entry for content.

Edited by Drakconus, 25 March 2009 - 04:57 AM.

[some_weirdGuy]

You could just edit your old form, which would be easier.

and you made a Some_weirdGuy style mistake:

but are simular.

similar is what you mean (my spelling checker would have actually picked that up for me, but still, its the sort of thing i do... you trying to steal my position are you?)


and this is from mikes topic:

Ok, you two can keep your 'human decedents', but they are separate from Humans of Sol, as humans of Sol are probably going to be the characters from the second part of the RP.
(so your guys left ages ago, or were abducted by aliens and have been living on a different world and have 'evolved'/grown up there)

Meaning i cant have any of the RP'ers controlling them.
You can understand that right? I need control of the race for the character RP part, and if they are humans, then you wouldn't be able to control them. But if you say they are some off shoot then that will be ok, but only for this time.

No other human-based factions besides you two

So they can be an offshoot from humanity.

So make changes as you want, but your faction as it is seems fairly good.

[Drakconus]

I will fix the first form and remove the second one.

[some_weirdGuy]

Ok then. They seem pretty good. I think i'd say accepted.
Now whenever you want you can post up any additional info on your guys in this thread.
(or just edit the first post, whatever you want)

[Drakconus]

Ok then. They seem pretty good. I think i'd say accepted.
Now whenever you want you can post up any additional info on your guys in this thread.
(or just edit the first post, whatever you want)

Can we clean this thread up a bit, like removing every post but the Form and your Approval Post? It would make reading it easier.

[some_weirdGuy]

ok, now i'll move them all to here

i'll make similar topics with the junk from each registration form if people want to post up more background and keep it neat