Brok
Started by The Best Guest, Jun 04 2010 08:22 PM
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#1
Posted 04 June 2010 - 08:22 PM
Name:Brok Stonebeard
Age:92 (still young for a dwarf)
Gender:male
Race:Dwarf
Weapons:halberd and broadsword and crossbow (all runed)
occupation:bounty hunter
skills in smithing
alignment:whoever pays the most
appearance: gold hair and a long gold beard, green eyes , a scar from his nose to the middle of his cheek
Height:4.2
Weight:160
Armor: Leather armor metal chain mail under, metal helm
History: Brok's father was a weapons smith and a miner. He taught Brok to attack first ask questions later which can explain his sudden outbursts. After his father was killed in a raid by the Drow, Brok swore to leave his home of Baruk to become a bounty hunter. Many years have hardened Brok into a Master Bounty hunter which has led him to be employed by many. In between jobs he works smithing minor things like daggers and such. He has one brother who is a Gaurd to the King of the Dwarves at Helvensi . Brok's brother is also a skilled smith who mainly works with ranged weapons and favors the crossbow as a weapon and sometimes accompines Brok on some of his jobs.
More recent history: It has been many years since brok has last been public. He has worked jobs sercretly and underground. Now he has decided to come back into the open and once agian become the best bounty hunter. His free time has allowed him to refine his smithing skills and has porgressed greatly in all aspects of combat and smithing.
Age:92 (still young for a dwarf)
Gender:male
Race:Dwarf
Weapons:halberd and broadsword and crossbow (all runed)
occupation:bounty hunter
skills in smithing
alignment:whoever pays the most
appearance: gold hair and a long gold beard, green eyes , a scar from his nose to the middle of his cheek
Height:4.2
Weight:160
Armor: Leather armor metal chain mail under, metal helm
History: Brok's father was a weapons smith and a miner. He taught Brok to attack first ask questions later which can explain his sudden outbursts. After his father was killed in a raid by the Drow, Brok swore to leave his home of Baruk to become a bounty hunter. Many years have hardened Brok into a Master Bounty hunter which has led him to be employed by many. In between jobs he works smithing minor things like daggers and such. He has one brother who is a Gaurd to the King of the Dwarves at Helvensi . Brok's brother is also a skilled smith who mainly works with ranged weapons and favors the crossbow as a weapon and sometimes accompines Brok on some of his jobs.
More recent history: It has been many years since brok has last been public. He has worked jobs sercretly and underground. Now he has decided to come back into the open and once agian become the best bounty hunter. His free time has allowed him to refine his smithing skills and has porgressed greatly in all aspects of combat and smithing.
#2
Posted 04 June 2010 - 09:47 PM
All fine apart from the history. There are no orcs in this world. Make it a raid by Drow or Deathknelve or humans and that'll be approvable. There are also three kings of the dwarves, one in each of the major citadels (Helvensi, Oster and The Burn). Just thought I'd mention that.
I hope I am a good enough writer that some day dwarves kill me and drink my blood for wisdom.
#3
Posted 05 June 2010 - 12:48 AM
Soooo.... evil?alignment:whoever pays the most
#4
Posted 05 June 2010 - 01:46 AM
No, just mercenary neutral.
Edited by Vithar, 05 June 2010 - 01:46 AM.
#5
Posted 05 June 2010 - 06:35 AM
Ninja'd (works as an inside-joke, too, Vithar )!
#6
Posted 08 June 2010 - 12:40 AM
fixed sorry about the shotty history its the orginal one i made years ago
#7
Posted 08 June 2010 - 08:51 AM
OK then, Brok is approved. Welcome aboard.
I hope I am a good enough writer that some day dwarves kill me and drink my blood for wisdom.
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