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#1 ElessartheHigh

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 03:46 PM

Hello dear modders and fans of Tolkien's world, I would like to share with you my poem I made this morning. I'm French, and since it is the very first attempt I know there are a lot of mistakes and wrong sentences . But here we go:

 

 

Lord of Gifts he was known

In the times of old

With the Elves of Eregion he befriended

There with them he shared and counseled

The secret of its arts and magic he held .



Great was his knowledge

The Elven Smiths had themselves a duty;

To make something up to his beauty

The Rings of Power

Rain like a shower



The Men accepted the Nine unsuspiciously

The Dwarves took the Seven them gladly

The Elves had forged the Three

They were all happy

But they did not see the treachery



When Annatar forged the One Ring

To rule them All

When the Elves realized

Thet He verbalized

His dark designs



One by one , the Free Peoples dwindled

The Elves had been expelled

From their fair domain

The Men fell into hell

The Dwarven people perished



Dominion is His ambition

Crualty is His inspiration

Destruction is His companion

And its Minions

He is the Dark Lord Sauron
       


All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not wither, Deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king.[1]

#2 Bashkuga

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 09:26 PM

Very nice!






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