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[WhiteDragon25]

As a counterpart to the MO3.0 Fan Art thread (found here), this thread is for any and all Mental Omega-related fan fiction!

 

Either write some yourself or give a link to someone else's work, but remember, the rules for the Fan Art thread just as equally apply here.

 

Have fun!

[someonebutnoone]

I am having this idea for a fanfic in which features the....

'COMMANDO BAR'.

 

Yep, it's all the ten commandos just trying to pass the time by having a drink here and socializing.

 

(Where's the expanded universe of Mental Omega? :o)

[WhiteDragon25]

I am having this idea for a fanfic in which features the....

'COMMANDO BAR'.

 

Yep, it's all the ten commandos just trying to pass the time by having a drink here and socializing.

 

(Where's the expanded universe of Mental Omega? :o)

 

I am expecting a lot of bar fights in that bar.

[Zenothist]

Welcome Proselytes!

 

This thread is for sharing your stories taking place or related to the Mental Omega universe!

 

You can either post your fan fiction here, or link it to a different site.

 

NSFW stories are tolerated, as long as you warn the reader and, if applicable, place the story in spoiler tags.

 

To keep the thread nice and tidy, it's also advisable to place longer stories within spoiler tags or better, on a different site specialized for fan fiction.

 

Otherwise, go crazy!

 

Edit: Moved the posts from the previous thread.. sort of.. for now. I'll fix it later this week.

Edited by Zenothist, 27 December 2013 - 07:11 PM.

[Protozoan]

When we think about Command & Conquer: Red Alert, we think about a top-down view, armies, base building, strategy, etc.

 

We all know Red Alert is set in an alternate universe, but there are some things that remain unchanged, horrific, life-scarring things. Like the sex market, prostitution and drug addiction, Yunru knows this.

 

When we see Yunru, little do we know what's she been through, we see an innocent 17 year old scientist that works for the Chinese military, but we don't know her story. What did Yunru do before she was a part of the Chinese military? Have you ever wondered that? How did she take care of her ill family? Getting a job in China is rough... Not if you're a young attractive woman... That's right friends, Yunru was a prostitute.

 

Enter the dark and unforgettable history of a young girl named Yunru, her struggle to support her family, to educate herself and fight the loneliness that seemingly overwhelmed her sanity. She always wanted to be around people that made her feel good, but not like this.

[WhiteDragon25]

*snip*

 

Man, can we just get past page one without any fanfic ideas involving sex in some way or another? Especially if it involves teenage girls. Because really, we have standards.

 

I blame Lovalmidas for this crap with Yunru; that pic of her and that dog started some really screwed up shit.

[Mister_Pants]

I am having this idea for a fanfic in which features the....

'COMMANDO BAR'.

 

Yep, it's all the ten commandos just trying to pass the time by having a drink here and socializing.

Malver would never be seen at the bar (Unless a hero/heroine approched him, but he's very 'shy' so he'd probably scuttle away), and Yunru is too young to drink (although this varies from country to country, you could totally give her the "She's old enough" trick anyway). Volkov I think wouldn't be able to drink at all, seeing as his poor circuits would get fried.  Although the idea of having the 3 of them socializing awkwardly while the other 6 heroes are getting their livers the time of their life would be quite funny. I'd read it.

[someonebutnoone]

I am having this idea for a fanfic in which features the....
'COMMANDO BAR'.
 
Yep, it's all the ten commandos just trying to pass the time by having a drink here and socializing.

Malver would never be seen at the bar (Unless a hero/heroine approched him, but he's very 'shy' so he'd probably scuttle away), and Yunru is too young to drink (although this varies from country to country, you could totally give her the "She's old enough" trick anyway). Volkov I think wouldn't be able to drink at all, seeing as his poor circuits would get fried.  Although the idea of having the 3 of them socializing awkwardly while the other 6 heroes are getting their livers the time of their life would be quite funny. I'd read it.

Actually, Volkov's request to his creators is to at least make his internal circuits to be liquidproof.

[someonebutnoone]

"Kennie's Pub"

Prologue:
(The following is a transcript from a mysterious letter sent by what he/she/it calls itself to be "Ken". This letter is sent mostly to military bases, in which the actual recipients are super-soldiers, incredibly specialized soldiers, and units that are classified as "commandos".)

"Dear 'commandoes', I have been watching you fight your enemies for what I can say 'quite a long time'. Let me start off by saying I commend your actions in the battlefield, whether by vanquishing battalions of enemy infantry, or sending groups of tanks into the scrapyard. Your military superiors should be proud of you, I believe.

But, don't you think that most of the time, that your superiors only care about your military expertise and not your personal rights as individuals? I've noticed that when you get injured at the battlefield, you are immediately sent to the nearest medical bunker, only to get commanded back to the field afterward, and you do not even have coffee breaks before your departure. It might sound that they love you so much they send you our again, but personally, I find it appalling , the best soldiers given the least best treatment.

I am giving you a chance to kick back and relax after a long battle. Here I have founded a large commando club which can be found in [DATA EXPUNGED]. After all, most of you try to drown your sorrows by alcohol, right?

So, if you plan to go here for a visit, here is the address: (EXPUNGED) [Note: This address cannot be found in public records]

With love and concern,
Ken.
P.S. Don't let Able and Seth find out about this."

[Protozoan]

 

*snip*

 

Man, can we just get past page one without any fanfic ideas involving sex in some way or another? Especially if it involves teenage girls. Because really, we have standards.

 

I blame Lovalmidas for this crap with Yunru; that pic of her and that dog started some really screwed up shit.

 

 

lmao

 

Sorreh, can't do. But if you'd like, Yunru can be at the age of 18 in the fanfic.

[Solais]

In my "headcanon", Yunru got a crush on Volkov (I mean, look at that machinery!), Volkov is actually a gentle soul under the cold iron (secretly playing fetch with Chitzkoi in fields of flowers; of course he doesn't want this to be known to anyone, because of his "image") and Malver is actually a ladies' man, despite him looking like Voldemort (or maybe, because of that).

Just some ideas for the bar.

[lovalmidas]

You know, I wasn't the first person to think dirty about stuff. I was just the first to create content on such (or not, ImP_RuLz beat me to it ). Not that I'm proud of it in hindsight.

I have seen somewhat worse bastardization of Yuriko Omega from RA3.

Anyway, would love to have all fanfics to be posted in sites like fanfiction, to reduce such clutter here. I am predicting stuff like the following in this thread:

"Story A - Chapter 1"
"Story B - Chapter 1"
"Story B - Chapter 2"
"some random comment"
"Story B - Chapter 3"
"Story A - Chapter 2"

Pretty confusing, no?

So, I'd recommend using a dedicated site, and link it here. You'd have greater control of your fanfic. Not to mention that site allows us to sort out rated fanfics too.

[Atomic_Noodles]

So we're talking of Fanfics about a Fanfic?

[WhiteDragon25]

So we're talking of Fanfics about a Fanfic?

 

Uhh... I guess?

[Atomic_Noodles]

 

So we're talking of Fanfics about a Fanfic?

 

Uhh... I guess?

 

 

Because Mental Omega in itself is a Fan Fiction of a Franchise and we now have people making Fan Fiction of someone's Fan Fiction...

[WhiteDragon25]

 

 

So we're talking of Fanfics about a Fanfic?

 

Uhh... I guess?

 

Because Mental Omega in itself is a Fan Fiction of a Franchise and we now have people making Fan Fiction of someone's Fan Fiction...

 

Fanfiception!

Edited by WhiteDragon25, 30 December 2013 - 04:13 AM.

[LusiGoosi]

I think I'll try this out, A fan fiction you say. hmmm *rubs chin* I think I'll try a series of letters to start, as it is a style of writing I'm used to. This will be fun!

[Sven Co. Op]

I'm gonna make a fan story of MO also using some of the suggested units in the suggestion forums. I still need some time to finalize the first part of it along with some of the suggested units I still looking up. 

[Zenothist]

The character designs we're currently working on will include how the heroes interact with each other. Hopefully this will give writers a better idea of how they are personality-wise!

[FiremariomkiZX 123-451-149]

Edited for another story came to mind.

 

Story 1: The Butcher

Spoiler

Death.

 

The stench of blood is in the air, and Volkov did not know whose it was. Was it his? Chitzkoi's? Allied soldiers? Soviet soldiers? All or none of the above? Who knows. World War II dragged on quite long for Volkov's tastes, and death was everywhere.

 

The merciless orders from Command had started to take a toll on the man, as his life devolved into a legalized slaughterer. The only one who could ever understand him was Chitzkoi, his faithful canine, who too was forced to slaughter.

 

Death.

 

An odd thing. He brought it on like a plague, and yet, here he was, at his final moments. Those that fed him, and gave him life were now coming to destroy him. He wouldn't go out quietly.

 

His last days had earned him a title. One he would remember...

 

The Butcher.

 

His eyes closed, but immediately opened again, in a newer facility. He couldn't feel his arms nor his legs, yet he could see them... or at least, he thought those were his arms and legs.

 

What were once his arms are now fused into an eldritch device, a bizarre Tesla cannon which seemed to leech away from his own life. When he was able to move, he felt a great weight on his back... A small, personal Tesla Reactor (the Soviets evidently stopped using coal a decade ago) was built and attached to his back, and was his lifeline. He saw Chitzkoi, or at least, a shadow of him. While the dog Volkov remembered was an aggressive, yet still normal creature, this Chitzkoi had only the eyes of a beast. A thing of massive rage for all things living. Almost a reflection of himself.

 

Something also snapped in Volkov's brain. The constant thought of death. Not just his own, but the death of civilians, Allies, Soviets, everything in his sight. A maniacal grin entered his face, the remaining skin over his titanium skull tearing apart even more, making him appear as some sort of mechanical zombie.

 

The Butcher hath returned.

 

Story 2: He Misses a Girl?

 

Spoiler

It was an odd day that Volkov, Chitzkoi, Yunru and Morales had to work together. Volkov was free, utterly murdering his foes with an unquenchable battle glee, whilst Chitzkoi unleashed his rage like the devil made manifest.

 

Morales and Yunru decided to plan out an ambush with some Engineers; Yunru would disable some Cavaliers, Morales would kill the drivers, whilst the Engineers took them over.

 

There was something... off about the other commandos, so thought the girl. Volkov was... a raving psychopath through action and thought, whilst Morales seemed to have a charismatic flair despite being half as insane as the Butcher... Much like some actors in a theatre she watched during the Chinese's cooperation with the Pacific Front. What was the term the soldiers used? A large ham? Yeah, that was it. Morales was a ham the size of New York, and he installed a microphone onto his sniper rifle so that he could share this talent to his enemies. Fortunately, his foes only have seconds before they either incinerate from being in the crossfire or having their brains blasted out before they could tell where he was.

 

Morales shot a tank, and spouted out a quote. "I miss my girl... BUT I WON'T MISS YOU!"

 

Yunru paused for a brief moment. He had a life other than the death squad? This got her curious, as she never thought as soldiers as being anything less than committed to the fight or otherwise distracted.

 

When the mission was successful, Morales shot the pair of tranquilizer darts needed to put Volkov and Chitzkoi to sleep and they proceeded to the assigned Borrilo for evacuation. After Volkov was recovered, Yunru finally asked the sniper about that thing that was bugging her. Morales chuckled, and proceeded with his tale.

 

Years before joining up with the death squad, he met an American girl. She had spunk, and a competitive attitude. And much like him, she was a firearms expert. Each time they went to the firing range, they'd blast all the targets in sight, before anyone so much as had a chance to blink. Eventually, the relation ended on a sour note, both of them had work to do. Morales began his work as an assassin, and the girl was never seen again... That is, until World War III. Morales saw his girl, and his girl saw him. He was Soviet and she was Allied. No matter how long the battle lasted, neither soldier were able to even get a scratch on the other, whether it be due to reflexes or due to hesitation on both soldiers' parts. Eventually, they had to part, considering they both had objectives to complete.

 

Yunru looked at Morales, who seemed to lose a bit of his flair and gained a bit more sorrowful mood. Fortunately, it was at this time Yunru had to depart from the transport.

 

It was then that Morales pulled out a photo and sighed.

 

"She's the best there is, that Tanya."

Edited by FiremariomkiZX 123-451-149, 08 January 2014 - 04:00 PM.